Part 1
Giám khảo
Are you good at memorising things?
Thí sinh
Definitely, I'm good at memories in things because I am a university student so I need to understand and memory loss of English words all my skills, so my brain always clearly.
Giám khảo
Have you ever forgotten something important?
Thí sinh
Actually, I must admit that I have ever forgotten something important. If I'm not mistaken, just last month when I was attending the morning class in my university, I have found that I lost my books in my demonstrate. So I need to rent one.
Giám khảo
What do you need to remember in your daily life?
Thí sinh
Actually, I need to remember a lot of things in my daily life. For example, I need to remember my family members phone numbers and my private, uh, credit card members, of course.
Giám khảo
How do you remember important things?
Thí sinh
DUI ya. What should I don't want?
Are you good at memorising things?
Điểm: 35.0Gợi ý: 回答缺乏清晰的主题句和逻辑,语法和用词错误较多,句子过长且不连贯。建议先给出直接的肯定或否定(主题句),然后用1–2个简短具体的理由或例子支持。注意时态和名词/动词搭配(memorise, memory, remember),避免冗长和重复。可以练习使用简单连词(because, so, therefore)连接句子。
Ví dụ: Yes, I am quite good at memorising things. As a university student, I often need to remember vocabulary and lecture notes, so I practise regularly by reviewing my notes every evening and using flashcards.
Have you ever forgotten something important?
Điểm: 40.0Gợi ý: 回答含混且语法错误明显(have ever, I have found, lost my books in my demonstrate),细节不清晰。建议直接回答是或否,随后给出清楚的具体事件描述(时间、地点、物品、后果)。使用简单过去时描述过去事件,并用连接词(for example, so)使逻辑清晰。
Ví dụ: Yes, I have. For example, last month I forgot my textbook in the lecture hall after a morning class. I realised it only later and had to borrow a copy from a classmate to follow the next lecture.
What do you need to remember in your daily life?
Điểm: 45.0Gợi ý: 答案比较接近要求但用词不准确(credit card members),且信息略散。建议先给出主题句,一到两个具体项作为支持,说明记忆这些信息的原因或如何管理它们。使用恰当词汇(phone numbers, credit card details)并避免说话犹豫(uh)。
Ví dụ: I need to remember several practical things, such as my family members' phone numbers and important financial details like my credit card number and expiry date. I memorise the most essential ones and store others safely in a password‑protected app.
How do you remember important things?
Điểm: 10.0Gợi ý: 回答不相关且无法理解,未能回应问题。建议首先简短回答方法(e.g. using lists, reminders, repetition),然后给出具体做法与例子。可提及工具(calendar, alarms, apps)和习惯(making lists, revising daily)。保持句子简短清晰。
Ví dụ: I usually use my phone to set reminders and alarms for important tasks. I also make a to‑do list each morning and review it before bed so I don't forget anything important.
× Definitely, I'm good at memories in things because I am a university student so I need to understand and memory loss of English words all my skills, so my brain always clearly.
✓ Definitely. I'm good at remembering things because I am a university student, so I need to learn and remember English words and other skills, and my brain is always clear.
错误类型:名词和动词形式使用不当(接近于“复数/动名词/动词形式”问题)。句中“memories”应使用动名词“remembering”表示“记住某事”的能力;“understand and memory loss of English words all my skills”结构混乱,应改为“learn and remember English words and other skills”;“my brain always clearly” 缺少系动词且副词/形容词用错,应改为“my brain is always clear”。建议:把名词改为动名词或动词短语,确保句子有完整主谓结构及正确形容词/副词形式。
× Actually, I must admit that I have ever forgotten something important.
✓ Actually, I must admit that I have forgotten something important.
错误类型:过去时态/完成时用法不当。“have ever forgotten” 在肯定句中用“ever”不合适,通常用于疑问或否定句。改为现在完成时“have forgotten”。建议:在陈述句中用“have forgotten”或直接用过去时“forgotten”并在句中给出时间。
× If I'm not mistaken, just last month when I was attending the morning class in my university, I have found that I lost my books in my demonstrate.
✓ If I'm not mistaken, just last month when I was attending a morning class at my university, I discovered that I had lost my books during my presentation.
错误类型:过去时态及词汇搭配不当。先发生的动作(丢书)应使用过去完成时“had lost”;“have found”与时间状语“just last month”不匹配,应用简单过去“discovered”或“found”;“in my demonstrate” 用词错误,意为“在我的展示/演示中”,应为“during my presentation”。建议:保持时态一致,注意正确名词搭配(presentation)。
× So I need to rent one.
✓ So I had to borrow one.
错误类型:情态动词/动词选择不当。原句“need to rent one”与上下文(丢书在课堂上,临时应对)更自然的表达是“had to borrow one”(不得不借一本)。建议:根据情境选择合适的动词和时态;如果是过去发生的事,用过去时态。
× Actually, I need to remember a lot of things in my daily life. For example, I need to remember my family members phone numbers and my private, uh, credit card members, of course.
✓ Actually, I need to remember a lot of things in my daily life. For example, I need to remember my family members' phone numbers and my private credit card information, of course.
错误类型:代词/所有格和词汇使用不当。应使用所有格“family members' phone numbers”;“credit card members”用词错误,应为“credit card information”或“credit card number”。建议:使用所有格表示所属关系,并用正确名词表达“信用卡信息”。
× DUI ya. What should I don't want?
✓ Um, I don't know. What should I do?
错误类型:句子结构错误和问句构造不当。原句“DUI ya” 无意义,可能为口误;“What should I don't want?” 既有助动词 should 又有否定“don't”,语法混乱。正确疑问句为“What should I do?” 或 “I don't know what to do.” 建议:说话前理清要表达的意思,避免口误并使用正确的助动词结构。