Memory— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: 답변이 의미 전달이 불명확하고 문법 오류가 많습니다. 먼저 직접적으로 질문에 대한 간단한 주제 문장을 말한 뒤, 간단한 이유를 한두 문장으로 덧붙이세요. 연결어(if, because, so 등)를 정확하게 사용하고, 반복이나 불필요한 단어는 제거하세요. 예를 들어 과거 또는 현재 능력을 말할 때는 'I'm not good at memorising things'처럼 명확한 표현을 쓰고, 이유는 'because I find it boring' 또는 'because I prefer understanding concepts'처럼 구체적으로 만드세요.

Ví dụ: No, I'm not good at memorising things. I find it difficult because I prefer understanding concepts rather than rote learning, so I often forget facts quickly.

Gợi ý: 이야기의 흐름은 있으나 문법과 어휘 선택이 어색합니다. 과거 경험을 말할 때는 단순과거 또는 현재완료를 일관되게 사용하세요(ex: 'I once forgot' 또는 'I've forgotten'). 또한 사건의 시간과 결과를 명확히 연결하는 접속사(so, therefore)를 사용하고, 사람·장소·결과 같은 구체적 세부사항을 추가하면 좋습니다.

Ví dụ: Yes, I once forgot an important appointment with my friends. We had planned to go to a fine-dining restaurant, but I completely forgot the day before, so they were very upset with me.

Gợi ý: 핵심 내용은 전달되지만 문장이 반복되고 어순이 어색합니다. 먼저 주제 문장(what you need to remember)을 말하고, 이유와 구체적인 방법을 한두 문장으로 덧붙이세요. 'to improve' 같은 목적 표현을 정확히 사용하고, 불필요한 반복을 제거하세요.

Ví dụ: Nowadays I am trying to study English for speaking tests, so I need to remember new vocabulary every day. To improve, I review word lists and use new words in sentences.

Gợi ý: 방법을 제시했지만 표현이 혼란스럽고 반복이 많습니다. 먼저 간단한 주제 문장으로 방법을 밝히고, 그 다음에 구체적인 도구나 습관을 설명하세요. 동사의 형태와 시제를 일관되게 사용하고, 'keep repeating' 대신 'review regularly' 같은 자연스러운 표현을 쓰세요.

Ví dụ: I usually write notes or use the Notes app on my smartphone to remember important things. I also review them regularly so the information sticks in my memory.

× No, I'm not great by more than things and I hate memorizing something because so I am not good at in English practice. Yeah.

✓ No, I'm not great at memorizing things and I hate memorizing because I'm not good at practicing English.

'Great by more than things' is incorrect phrasing; use 'great at' + verb-ing for ability. 'Memorizing something because so I am not good at in English practice' contains unnecessary words and wrong preposition 'at in'. Simplify to 'I hate memorizing because I'm not good at practicing English.' Use 'memorizING' after 'great at' and 'good at'.

× Yeah, I've ever forgotten the appointment in my fam.

✓ Yes, I've forgotten an appointment with my family.

'I've ever forgotten' is incorrect; 'ever' is not used with present perfect in this context. Use 'I've forgotten' for experience. 'the appointment in my fam' should be 'an appointment with my family' for correct article and preposition.

× My friends, we plan to go to fine dining, but the day before we plan to.

✓ My friends and I had planned to go fine dining, but the day before I forgot.

Subject pronoun order should be 'My friends and I'. Tense consistency: use past perfect or past ('had planned' or 'planned') because event is in past. 'We plan to' repeated awkwardly; clarify that you forgot the plan.

× I just forgot it and my friends was really angry about that.

✓ I just forgot it and my friends were really angry about that.

Subject 'my friends' is plural so verb should be 'were' not 'was'. Maintain past tense 'forgot'.

× Nowadays I am trying to study English for either speaking tests or IELTS tests.

✓ Nowadays I am trying to study English for speaking tests or the IELTS.

'Either' is unnecessary here and 'IELTS tests' is redundant; 'the IELTS' is standard. Tense 'am trying' is correct.

× I need to remember my I need to remember English vocabulary in my daily life so to to get improved it.

✓ I need to remember English vocabulary in my daily life to improve.

Remove the duplicated phrase 'I need to remember' and extra 'my'. 'so to to get improved it' is ungrammatical; use 'to improve'.

× For me, I'm I take the notes or using Notes app in my smartphone or I just keeping keeping again and again to memorize memorizing it.

✓ For me, I take notes or use the Notes app on my smartphone, or I keep repeating things to memorize them.

Avoid mixing forms: use parallel structure 'take notes' and 'use the Notes app'. 'keeping keeping' should be 'keep repeating' and use plural object pronoun 'them'. 'memorize' or 'memorizing' after 'to' should be base form 'memorize', but here 'to memorize them' is correct; using gerund 'memorizing' is also possible in different structures.