Part 1
Giám khảo
Are you good at memorising things?
Thí sinh
No, I'm not very good at memorizing things nowadays. I used to have a good memory when I was a child, but as I grew up and technology developed repeatedly, I started relying more on my smartphone to remember important information.
Giám khảo
Have you ever forgotten something important?
Thí sinh
Yes, I have gotten something important before. For example, once I've got to bring the login details for my university website, which I need to complete an online crossword puzzle for my colleagues. It was quite stressful because I need to ask for help and reset my passport password.
Giám khảo
What do you need to remember in your daily life?
Thí sinh
Nowadays I need to remember the passwords for different online accounts because it's important to keep my information secure. Besides that, I also have to remember the knowledge from my school subjects so I so that I can perform well in my tests.
Giám khảo
How do you remember important things?
Thí sinh
I used remember important things by using my smartphone because I heavily rely on technology. For example, I read down notes or set reminders so I so when I need the information I can quickly search for it on my phone.
Are you good at memorising things?
Điểm: 75.0Gợi ý: 回答较为自然且内容相关,但句子结构稍显复杂且有重复表达,如“technology developed repeatedly”不够准确。建议简化句子结构,避免冗余,并使用更准确的表达。
Ví dụ: No, I'm not very good at memorizing things these days. When I was a child, my memory was better, but now I rely on my smartphone to store important information.
Have you ever forgotten something important?
Điểm: 60.0Gợi ý: 回答中存在语法错误和表达不清,如“have gotten something important”不合适,且细节描述混乱。建议使用正确的时态和表达,清晰描述事件经过。
Ví dụ: Yes, I once forgot to bring the login details for my university website. I needed them to complete an online crossword puzzle for my colleagues, so I had to ask for help and reset my password, which was quite stressful.
What do you need to remember in your daily life?
Điểm: 70.0Gợi ý: 回答内容相关,但句子末尾有重复和不完整表达(“so I so that”)。建议注意句子完整性和流畅性,避免重复。
Ví dụ: I need to remember passwords for various online accounts to keep my information secure. Also, I have to remember what I learn in school to do well in my tests.
How do you remember important things?
Điểm: 65.0Gợi ý: 回答中存在语法错误(如“used remember”应为“used to remember”),且表达不够流畅。建议使用正确的时态和更自然的表达方式。
Ví dụ: I usually remember important things by using my smartphone because I rely heavily on technology. For example, I write notes or set reminders so I can quickly find the information when I need it.
× Yes, I have gotten something important before.
✓ Yes, I have forgotten something important before.
这里应该使用动词forget的过去分词forgotten,而不是gotten,因为句子想表达“我曾经忘记过重要的事情”。
× For example, once I've got to bring the login details for my university website, which I need to complete an online crossword puzzle for my colleagues.
✓ For example, once I had to bring the login details for my university website, which I needed to complete an online crossword puzzle for my colleagues.
这里描述过去发生的事情,应该使用一般过去时态,'I've got to'不符合语境,应改为'had to',同时后半句的动词也应改为过去时态。
× It was quite stressful because I need to ask for help and reset my passport password.
✓ It was quite stressful because I needed to ask for help and reset my password.
前半句是过去时态,后半句应保持时态一致,故将need改为needed。且“passport password”表达不准确,应为“password”。
× Besides that, I also have to remember the knowledge from my school subjects so I so that I can perform well in my tests.
✓ Besides that, I also have to remember the knowledge from my school subjects so that I can perform well in my tests.
句子中出现了重复的“so I so that”,属于句子结构错误,应删除多余部分。
× I used remember important things by using my smartphone because I heavily rely on technology.
✓ I used to remember important things by using my smartphone because I heavily rely on technology.
表达过去习惯时应使用“used to”,缺少“to”导致语法错误。