Memory— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: Жауабыңызда грамматикалық қателер бар және сөйлем құрылымы кейде түсініксіз. Мысалы, 'I can memorizing' дұрыс емес, 'I can memorize' деп айту керек. Сонымен қатар, жауапты қысқа әрі нақты етіп, артық сөздерді алып тастаңыз. Мысалы, 'I am good at memorizing football players' names and whether they are left or right-footed, but I often forget historical dates or birthdays.'

Ví dụ: I am good at memorizing football players' names and whether they are left or right-footed. However, I often forget historical dates or people's birthdays.

Gợi ý: Жауабыңызда артық үзілістер мен қайталанулар бар, олар жауаптың табиғилығын төмендетеді. Сөйлемдерді қысқа әрі нақты етіп құрастырыңыз. Мысалы, 'Yes, I once forgot a university assignment deadline and received zero for it.'

Ví dụ: Yes, I once forgot a university assignment deadline and received zero for it, which was a valuable lesson for me.

Gợi ý: Жауабыңызда тақырыпты нақтылап, сөйлемдерді дұрыс құрылымдаған жөн. Қосымша ақпаратты байланыстыру үшін 'for example' немесе 'such as' сияқты сөздерді қолданыңыз. Мысалы, 'In daily life, I need to remember university assignment deadlines and daily tasks, such as paying bills on time.'

Ví dụ: In daily life, I need to remember university assignment deadlines and daily tasks, such as paying bills on time.

Gợi ý: Жауабыңызда кейбір сөз тіркестері дұрыс қолданылмаған, мысалы, 'plant things before' дегенді 'plan things in advance' деп айту керек. Сонымен қатар, сөйлемдерді логикалық түрде байланыстырыңыз. Мысалы, 'I usually write important things down on my phone or in a notebook because it helps me remember. Also, I have a habit of planning things in advance to memorize important tasks.'

Ví dụ: I usually write important things down on my phone or in a notebook because it helps me remember. Also, I have a habit of planning things in advance to memorize important tasks.

× I can memorizing very well about football, for example, football players, their surname, their middle name or they left footed or right footed.

✓ I can memorize very well about football, for example, football players, their surname, their middle name or whether they are left footed or right footed.

The verb 'can' should be followed by the base form of the verb, not the '-ing' form. Therefore, 'memorizing' should be corrected to 'memorize'. Also, 'they left footed or right footed' is incorrect; it should be 'whether they are left footed or right footed' to properly express the idea.

× I confuse it all the time.

✓ I get confused all the time.

The verb 'confuse' is transitive and requires an object; here, the intended meaning is that the speaker becomes confused, so the correct expression is 'I get confused'. This is a common way to express becoming confused in English.

× I forgot my, one of my uh, assignments deadline and uh, got 0 for that mistake.

✓ I forgot one of my assignment deadlines and got 0 for that mistake.

The past tense 'forgot' is correct, but 'assignments deadline' should be pluralized to 'assignment deadlines' to match the meaning. Also, the phrase 'my, one of my uh' is redundant and should be simplified for clarity.

× I forgot my, one of my uh, assignments deadline and uh, got 0 for that mistake.

✓ I forgot one of my assignment deadlines and got 0 for that mistake.

The noun 'deadline' should be pluralized to 'deadlines' because it refers to one of multiple deadlines. Also, 'assignments' as a possessive adjective should be singular 'assignment' to modify 'deadlines' correctly.

× I usually need to remember about my university assignments like their deadlines and how to do it, when to do it.

✓ I usually need to remember my university assignments like their deadlines and how to do them, when to do them.

The verb 'remember' does not require the preposition 'about' when followed by a direct object. Also, 'how to do it' and 'when to do it' should agree in number with 'assignments', so 'them' is appropriate.

× maybe I have I have to pay my bills today in my phone.

✓ Maybe I have to pay my bills today using my phone.

The phrase 'in my phone' is incorrect; the correct preposition is 'using' to indicate the means by which the bills are paid. Also, the repetition 'I have I have' is redundant and should be corrected.

× It gives me a good memory by writing down.

✓ It helps me remember well by writing things down.

The phrase 'gives me a good memory' is unnatural; 'helps me remember well' is more appropriate. Also, 'writing down' should be 'writing things down' to specify the action clearly.

× And also I have a good habit of plant things before so I can use that technique for my for memorizing important things.

✓ Also, I have a good habit of planning things in advance, so I can use that technique for memorizing important things.

The noun 'habit' should be followed by the gerund 'planning' not the base verb 'plant'. The phrase 'before' is vague; 'in advance' is clearer. Also, 'for my for memorizing' is redundant and should be simplified.