Memory— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: Try to make your answer more natural and clear by avoiding repetition and grammatical errors. Use linking words to connect ideas smoothly and keep your sentences concise, not exceeding five sentences. For example, instead of repeating 'quite challenging for me', you can say 'I often find it difficult to remember faces and numbers, especially in social situations.'

Ví dụ: No, I'm not very good at memorising things. I often find it difficult to remember faces and numbers, especially in social situations. To overcome this, I usually use my phone to take notes or set reminders. This helps me manage my memory challenges effectively.

Gợi ý: Your answer is quite clear but can be improved by using more precise vocabulary and linking words to enhance coherence. Also, correct minor grammatical errors such as 'password' should be plural 'passwords' and 'in those situation' should be 'in those situations'.

Ví dụ: Yes, I have forgotten important things before, especially numbers like phone numbers or passwords. This usually happens when I'm stressed or distracted, for example during busy social events or when I have a lot on my mind. Consequently, recalling numbers becomes quite difficult for me in those situations.

Gợi ý: Improve your answer by correcting grammar mistakes such as 'a lots of' to 'a lot of', 'children's need' to 'children's needs', and 'important task' to 'important tasks'. Use linking words like 'because' or 'so' to connect ideas smoothly and keep sentences concise.

Ví dụ: In my daily life, I need to remember a lot of things related to my job and family. Because I am both a mother and a worker, it is quite challenging to keep track of appointments, deadlines, and my children's needs. So, I often use my smartphone to stay organised and avoid forgetting important tasks.

Gợi ý: Make your answer more natural by correcting grammar errors like 'I guess smartphone has helped me' to 'I think my smartphone has helped me'. Use linking words such as 'for example' to introduce specific details and avoid redundancy by not repeating 'my kids' multiple times.

Ví dụ: The easiest way for me to stay organised is by using my smartphone. I think it has helped me a lot to take notes on important things, for example, my children's updates, appointments, and even my own future appointments.

× No, I'm not very good at memorizing thing.

✓ No, I'm not very good at memorizing things.

The word 'thing' should be plural 'things' because it refers to multiple items in general. In English, when talking about general items in plural, the plural form is required.

× I often find it so difficult for me to remember faces and for numbers, which quite challenging for me to it, uh, quite challenging for me in social situation.

✓ I often find it very difficult to remember faces and numbers, which is quite challenging for me in social situations.

The original sentence has redundant and misplaced phrases causing confusion. 'For me' is unnecessary after 'difficult', and 'to it' is incorrect. Also, 'social situation' should be plural 'social situations' to generalize. The sentence is restructured for clarity and grammatical correctness.

× So to overcome this, I usually go use my phone to talk out every.

✓ So to overcome this, I usually use my phone to write everything down.

The phrase 'go use' is incorrect; 'usually use' is appropriate. 'Talk out every' is unclear and incorrect; the intended meaning is likely 'write everything down' or 'make notes'. The correction clarifies the intended action and uses correct prepositions and verbs.

× Yes, I have forgotten important things before, especially numbers like phone numbers or password.

✓ Yes, I have forgotten important things before, especially numbers like phone numbers or passwords.

The word 'password' should be plural 'passwords' to match the plural context of 'numbers like phone numbers or passwords'. When listing multiple items, plural forms are required.

× It can be quite frustrating because recalling numbers is difficult for me in those situation.

✓ It can be quite frustrating because recalling numbers is difficult for me in those situations.

The word 'situation' should be plural 'situations' because it refers to multiple instances or contexts. Using plural form is necessary to generalize the statement.

× In my daily life, I need to remember a lots of things related to my job and family.

✓ In my daily life, I need to remember lots of things related to my job and family.

The phrase 'a lots of' is incorrect. The correct quantifier is 'lots of' without 'a'. 'Lots of' is used to indicate a large number of countable or uncountable nouns.

× Since I am a mother and a worker, it is quite challenging for me to keep track of appointments, deadlines and my children's need.

✓ Since I am a mother and a worker, it is quite challenging for me to keep track of appointments, deadlines, and my children's needs.

The word 'need' should be plural 'needs' because it refers to multiple requirements or necessities of the children. Plural form is required when referring to multiple items.

× Therefore, I often use my smartphone to help me to stay organised and avoid forgetting important task.

✓ Therefore, I often use my smartphone to help me stay organised and avoid forgetting important tasks.

The word 'task' should be plural 'tasks' because it refers to multiple duties or responsibilities. Also, 'help me to stay' can be simplified to 'help me stay' for natural English usage.

× The easiest way for me to stay organised is using my smartphone.

✓ The easiest way for me to stay organised is to use my smartphone.

After 'is', the infinitive form 'to use' is required instead of the gerund 'using' to correctly express the method or way of doing something.

× I guess smartphone has helped me a lot to make sure that I'm taking notes on everything that is important such as my kids updates, my kids appointments or even my appointments in the future.

✓ I guess my smartphone has helped me a lot to make sure that I'm taking notes on everything that is important such as my kids' updates, my kids' appointments, or even my appointments in the future.

The word 'smartphone' needs the possessive pronoun 'my' to specify ownership. Also, 'kids updates' and 'kids appointments' require possessive apostrophes as 'kids'' to show that the updates and appointments belong to the kids.