Memory— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: 回答中有较多的语气词“uh”，影响流畅性。建议减少填充词，回答时结构更清晰，避免重复表达。可以用更自然的表达方式，简洁明了地说明自己不擅长记忆，并举例说明如何补救。

Ví dụ: I'm not very good at memorising things, so I usually write down important deadlines and key points to help me remember them.

Gợi ý: 回答不够直接，表达含糊且有较多犹豫和重复。建议直接回答问题，说明是否忘记过重要事情，并解释如何避免忘记。减少语气词，增强表达的自信和连贯性。

Ví dụ: Yes, I have forgotten important things before, but now I write notes to remind myself so it doesn't happen again.

Gợi ý: 回答内容较具体，但表达有些重复且语法不够准确。建议简化句子结构，避免重复“write down notes”，并更准确地表达“essential tasks”。

Ví dụ: I need to remember my daily tasks, so I write them down and sometimes ask my friends to remind me, which helps a lot.

Gợi ý: 回答中有语法错误和表达不清，如“send this message to the light box with your mom”不明确。建议使用更准确的表达，减少语气词，清晰说明记忆方法。

Ví dụ: Remembering things is difficult for me, so I ask my friends or my mom to remind me daily. I also write important notes to help myself.

× I tend to write down some notes to remind myself.

✓ I tend to write down some notes to remind myself.

此句中“notes”使用正确的复数形式，无需修改。

× I always write on the deadline and essential terms to remind me

✓ I always write down the deadline and essential terms to remind myself

“write on”应改为“write down”，表示“写下”；“remind me”应改为“remind myself”，因为提醒的是自己。

× I need to remember the daily task, so I always write down some notes to remind myself.

✓ I need to remember the daily tasks, so I always write down some notes to remind myself.

“daily task”应为复数形式“daily tasks”，因为日常任务通常不止一个。

× I always write the daily tasks and ask my friend to remind me if I forget some insulin essential tasks and this helped me a lot.

✓ I always write the daily tasks and ask my friends to remind me if I forget some essential tasks, and this helps me a lot.

“friend”应为复数“friends”，因为通常会有多个朋友；“insulin essential tasks”词序错误，应为“essential tasks”；“helped”时态应与现在时态一致，改为“helps”。

× remember thing is really a challenge for me

✓ remembering things is really a challenge for me

“remember thing”应改为动名词形式“remembering things”，且“thing”应为复数“things”，表示记忆多件事物。

× I always write on the deadline and essential terms to remind me

✓ I always write down the deadline and essential terms to remind myself

“write on”用法错误，应为“write down”，表示“写下”；“remind me”应为“remind myself”，因为提醒的是自己。

× I tend to write down some notes to remind myself. For example, I always write on the deadline and essential terms to remind me

✓ I tend to write down some notes to remind myself. For example, I always write down the deadline and essential terms to remind myself

前后代词应保持一致，均用“myself”表示自己。

× Maybe, but I can remember clearly because I'm not good at memorizing things. Umm, but I think it has passed.

✓ Maybe, but I can't remember clearly because I'm not good at memorizing things. Umm, but I think it has passed.

“can remember clearly”与上下文矛盾，应为“can't remember clearly”；“has passed”时态使用正确。

× I always write the daily tasks and ask my friend to remind me if I forget some insulin essential tasks and this helped me a lot.

✓ I always write the daily tasks and ask my friends to remind me if I forget some essential tasks, and this helps me a lot.

“friend”应为复数“friends”，且“helped”应改为“helps”以保持时态一致。

× just send this message to the light box with your mom.

✓ just send this message to the light box with my mom.

“your mom”应改为“my mom”，因为说话者指的是自己的妈妈。