Memory— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: Your answer is unclear and contains grammatical errors and irrelevant information. Try to give a clear and concise response directly addressing the question, avoid filler words, and use correct grammar. Also, avoid confusing or unrelated phrases.

Ví dụ: To be honest, I'm not very good at memorising things because I tend to forget information after a short time. For example, when I memorise a paragraph, I usually forget it within a week.

Gợi ý: Your answer is relevant but has some grammatical mistakes and awkward phrasing. Try to use complete sentences and linking words to make your answer more coherent and natural.

Ví dụ: It's quite rare for me to forget something important because I usually write down my tasks in a notebook. This helps me remember what I need to do, especially during emergencies.

Gợi ý: Your answer repeats ideas and has grammatical errors. Try to be more concise and use linking words to connect your ideas smoothly. Also, avoid repeating the same phrase multiple times.

Ví dụ: In my daily life, I rely on my diary to remember important tasks. Whenever I have urgent work, I check my diary, which helps me complete my tasks efficiently.

Gợi ý: Your answer is repetitive and contains many filler words and grammatical mistakes. Try to answer directly, avoid repetition, and use proper sentence structure and linking words.

Ví dụ: As I mentioned before, I use my diary to remember important tasks. By reading it regularly, I can keep track of my work and complete important jobs on time.

× I, when I was gay, that time if, uh, I memorized any kind of paragraph and after a few years, a few, a week later, I did that memory remember this thing.

✓ When I was young, if I memorized any kind of paragraph, after a week or so, I forgot it.

The original sentence incorrectly uses 'was gay' instead of 'was young' and has confusing tense usage. 'Did that memory remember this thing' is incorrect; the past tense 'forgot' should be used to express losing memory over time. The sentence is corrected to clearly express past events with proper past tense verbs.

× So I'm not good at memorizing something.

✓ So I'm not good at memorizing things.

The pronoun 'something' is less appropriate here; 'things' is more general and fits better with the context of memorizing multiple items. Using 'things' is more natural in this context.

× Whenever I have an emergency in the future. That time as much as possible I try to write down which really helpful for me to Remember Me.

✓ Whenever I have an emergency in the future, I try as much as possible to write it down, which is really helpful for me to remember.

The original sentences are fragmented and lack proper structure. 'That time as much as possible' is awkward and unclear. The correction combines the ideas into a coherent sentence with proper conjunctions and verb forms.

× which really helpful for me to Remember Me.

✓ which is really helpful for me to remember.

'Remember Me' is incorrect here; the verb 'remember' should not be followed by 'me' in this context. The phrase should be 'helpful for me to remember' to indicate the action of recalling information.

× In my daily life, I usually follow my diary.

✓ In my daily life, I usually follow my diary entries.

The verb 'follow' is not typically used with 'diary' alone. Adding 'entries' clarifies that the person follows the notes or plans written in the diary. Alternatively, 'use' or 'refer to' could be used.

× So whenever I have any emergency work, that time if I daily follow my diary, it helps me to remember what I write down this diary.

✓ So whenever I have any emergency work, if I follow my diary daily, it helps me remember what I have written in it.

The original sentence is awkward and ungrammatical. 'That time if I daily follow my diary' is incorrect word order. The correction rearranges the sentence for clarity and correct tense usage.

× I usually follow diary.

✓ I usually follow my diary.

The noun 'diary' requires a possessive determiner 'my' to specify whose diary is being referred to.

× which gives me remember, uh, this task.

✓ which helps me remember this task.

The phrase 'gives me remember' is incorrect. The verb 'help' should be used with the base form 'remember' to express assistance in recalling.

× As a result, I can easily completed this important work.

✓ As a result, I can easily complete this important work.

The modal verb 'can' should be followed by the base form of the verb, not the past tense. 'Completed' is incorrect after 'can'; it should be 'complete'.