Part 1
Giám khảo
Are you good at memorising things?
Thí sinh
No, I'm not good at memorizing things because I often misplaced items like phones or keys. Also, I find it difficult to remember complex information. To cope with this, I usually rely on digital apps that send me reminders or set alarms, which help me stay organized and avoid forgetting important tasks.
Giám khảo
Have you ever forgotten something important?
Thí sinh
No, I haven't forgotten anything important recently because I tend to have a poor memory, so I always try to stay organised. For example, I rely on digital naps that keep track of vital things or dates. Additionally, I put stick notes on my fridge or desk as reminders which help me avoid forgetting important events.
Giám khảo
What do you need to remember in your daily life?
Thí sinh
Most of my daily reminders are related to school responsibilities because I'm just a college student. For example, I need to meet the deadline for the projects and assignments to avoid criticism from my professor. Besides that, I also try to remember special occasions like my family members birthday so we can celebrate together.
Giám khảo
How do you remember important things?
Thí sinh
I tend to have a poor memory, so I always find notes to stay organized. For example, I usually use digital apps like calendar apps to send me reminders which help me remember vital tasks. Every morning I will double check this reminders to make sure I don't forget anything important.
Are you good at memorising things?
Điểm: 85.0Gợi ý: 回答较为自然且内容完整,但存在语法错误(如misplaced应为misplace),且部分表达略显重复。建议注意动词时态和单复数形式,避免重复表达。
Ví dụ: No, I'm not good at memorizing things because I often misplace items like my phone or keys. However, I use digital apps that send me reminders and set alarms, which help me stay organized and avoid forgetting important tasks.
Have you ever forgotten something important?
Điểm: 75.0Gợi ý: 回答内容有些重复且存在拼写错误(digital naps应为digital apps,stick notes应为sticky notes),影响表达清晰度。建议注意单词拼写,避免重复,并丰富细节。
Ví dụ: No, I haven't forgotten anything important recently because I have a poor memory, so I stay organized. For example, I use digital apps to keep track of important dates, and I put sticky notes on my fridge or desk as reminders.
What do you need to remember in your daily life?
Điểm: 88.0Gợi ý: 回答结构清晰,内容具体,但有小的语法错误(family members birthday应为family members' birthdays),建议注意所有格的正确使用。
Ví dụ: Most of my daily reminders are related to school responsibilities because I'm a college student. For example, I need to meet deadlines for projects and assignments to avoid criticism from my professors. Besides that, I also try to remember my family members' birthdays so we can celebrate together.
How do you remember important things?
Điểm: 80.0Gợi ý: 回答内容较好,但存在语法错误(this reminders应为these reminders),且表达略显重复。建议注意冠词和复数形式的使用,并尝试使用更多连接词使表达更流畅。
Ví dụ: I have a poor memory, so I use notes to stay organized. For example, I usually use digital calendar apps that send me reminders to help me remember important tasks. Every morning, I double-check these reminders to make sure I don't forget anything important.
× I often misplaced items like phones or keys.
✓ I often misplace items like phones or keys.
这里的动词时态应与句子主语和时间状况一致,原句中使用了过去式'misplaced',但句子表达的是经常发生的动作,应使用一般现在时'misplace'。
× I rely on digital naps that keep track of vital things or dates.
✓ I rely on digital apps that keep track of vital things or dates.
原句中'naps'应为'apps',这是单词拼写错误,导致语义不清。
× I need to meet the deadline for the projects and assignments to avoid criticism from my professor.
✓ I need to meet the deadlines for the projects and assignments to avoid criticism from my professor.
'deadline'应与复数名词'projects and assignments'保持一致,使用复数形式'deadlines'更合适。
× I also try to remember special occasions like my family members birthday so we can celebrate together.
✓ I also try to remember special occasions like my family members' birthdays so we can celebrate together.
'family members'是复数,表示多个家庭成员,'birthday'应使用复数形式'birthdays',且所有格应加撇号表示所有关系。
× Every morning I will double check this reminders to make sure I don't forget anything important.
✓ Every morning I will double check these reminders to make sure I don't forget anything important.
'reminders'是复数,指示代词应使用复数形式'these',而不是单数形式'this'。