Memory— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: 回答不够连贯，存在重复和语法错误。建议回答时先给出明确的主题句，然后用具体例子支持，避免使用填充词“uh”。

Ví dụ: Yes, I am quite good at memorising things. For example, I can easily remember gifts from my parents and friends, as well as important moments when people have helped me.

Gợi ý: 回答语法错误较多，表达不清晰。建议使用正确的时态和句子结构，清楚描述事件并表达感受。

Ví dụ: Yes, I forgot my classmate's birthday last week. Fortunately, my friend reminded me, so I quickly bought a gift to make up for it.

Gợi ý: 回答内容较丰富，但语法和表达不够准确。建议先给出主题句，再用连词连接具体事项，注意语法和词序。

Ví dụ: I need to remember many things daily, such as the time to take my medicine, my parents' and friends' birthdays, my homework, and the need to exercise regularly.

Gợi ý: 回答中有重复和语法错误，表达不够自然。建议使用连贯的句子，明确说明记忆方法，避免填充词。

Ví dụ: I usually write important things in my diary, and I also tell my friends about them so they can remind me if I forget.

× Yes, such as I forgotten my classmates birthday in last week.

✓ Yes, such as I forgot my classmate's birthday last week.

这里使用了错误的过去分词形式“forgotten”，正确的过去式是“forgot”。另外，“classmates birthday”缺少所有格，应为“classmate's birthday”。“in last week”应改为“last week”，因为“last week”是具体时间点，不用介词“in”。

× Unfortunately my dramat told me and I buy gift.

✓ Unfortunately, my drama teacher told me and I bought a gift.

“buy”应使用过去式“bought”，因为动作发生在过去。句中“dramat”应为“drama teacher”或类似表达。

× A hurry is nothing nothing.

✓ Hurrying is useless.

原句结构混乱，表达不清。应使用动名词“hurrying”作为主语，表达“匆忙是没有用的”。

× Yes, I have a lot of things need to remember such as how time I take medicine and my parents and my friend birthday, my homework or I should do exercise.

✓ Yes, I have a lot of things I need to remember, such as when I take medicine, my parents' and my friend's birthdays, my homework, or that I should do exercise.

“things need to remember”缺少主语“I”，应为“I need to remember”。“how time”应为“when”。“my parents and my friend birthday”应为“my parents' and my friend's birthdays”，所有格和复数形式错误。

× I usually write important things in my daily uh, or I tell my friends I have a important things to do, uh, and they uh, Remember Me.

✓ I usually write important things in my diary, or I tell my friends I have important things to do, and they remember me.

“my daily”应为“my diary”，词汇错误。“a important things”中“a”与复数“things”不匹配，应去掉“a”。“Remember Me”不应大写。