Part 1
Giám khảo
Are you good at memorising things?
Thí sinh
Memorize things is one of my stress. I always thought memory thinks it's easy for me and I tend to memorize something important. Uh, but that less important thing, I won't try my best to memorize that that.
Giám khảo
Have you ever forgotten something important?
Thí sinh
Actually, I think I might forgotten something important, but at that moment I can't remember anyone. So I think and I have AI think it's a great H uh, habitat. I write down something as.
Giám khảo
What do you need to remember in your daily life?
Thí sinh
Actually I think my day is quite live in and routine so I don't have nothing special to remember and I think one of the most important thing I should remember in my daily life, it should be something special like my mom's birthday and something.
Giám khảo
How do you remember important things?
Thí sinh
Writing things down make it seriously. So if something is really important for me, I might write down it and also use my calendar or reminder. I just use something, uh, productivity app to keep things organized.
Are you good at memorising things?
Điểm: 55.0Gợi ý: 回答中语法错误较多,表达不够自然,且有重复和不连贯的地方。建议简化句子结构,避免重复,使用更准确的词汇表达记忆能力。
Ví dụ: Yes, I am quite good at memorising important information because I focus more on things that matter to me. However, I don't try hard to remember less important details.
Have you ever forgotten something important?
Điểm: 40.0Gợi ý: 回答不完整且含糊,语法错误明显,表达不清晰。建议直接回答问题,并说明如何应对忘记重要事情的情况。
Ví dụ: Yes, I have forgotten important things before, but to avoid this, I usually write down important notes or use reminders on my phone.
What do you need to remember in your daily life?
Điểm: 50.0Gợi ý: 回答中有双重否定和语法错误,表达不够清晰。建议直接回答问题,列举具体需要记住的事项,并使用连贯的句子。
Ví dụ: In my daily life, I need to remember routine tasks, but special occasions like my mom's birthday are the most important things I try to remember.
How do you remember important things?
Điểm: 65.0Gợi ý: 回答较为清晰,但语法和表达仍有改进空间。建议注意主谓一致,使用更自然的表达方式,并适当扩展细节。
Ví dụ: I usually write important things down and use my calendar or reminder apps to keep track of them. This helps me stay organized and not forget important tasks.
× Memorize things is one of my stress.
✓ Memorizing things is one of my stresses.
这里'stress'是可数名词,表示压力,复数形式应为'stresses'。另外,动词应使用动名词形式'memorizing'作为主语。
× I always thought memory thinks it's easy for me and I tend to memorize something important.
✓ I always think memorizing is easy for me and I tend to memorize important things.
原句中'thought'时态不合适,应为一般现在时'think'。'memory thinks'结构不正确,应改为'memorizing'。'something important'应改为复数形式'important things'以匹配上下文。
× Uh, but that less important thing, I won't try my best to memorize that that.
✓ But less important things, I won't try my best to memorize.
'that less important thing'应改为复数形式'less important things',且重复的'that'应去掉。
× Actually, I think I might forgotten something important, but at that moment I can't remember anyone.
✓ Actually, I think I might have forgotten something important, but at that moment I couldn't remember anything.
'might forgotten'应为'might have forgotten',这是情态动词后接完成时的正确结构。'can't remember anyone'语义不合适,应为'couldn't remember anything'。
× So I think and I have AI think it's a great H uh, habitat.
✓ So I think AI is a great help.
原句中'and I have AI think'结构混乱,且'habitat'用词错误,应为'help'。
× I write down something as.
✓ I write things down.
原句结构不完整,缺少谓语和宾语,改为完整表达。
× Actually I think my day is quite live in and routine so I don't have nothing special to remember
✓ Actually, I think my day is quite live-in and routine, so I don't have anything special to remember.
'don't have nothing'是双重否定,应改为'don't have anything'。
× and I think one of the most important thing I should remember in my daily life, it should be something special like my mom's birthday and something.
✓ and I think one of the most important things I should remember in my daily life should be something special like my mom's birthday and other events.
'one of the most important thing'中'thing'应为复数'things'。句尾'something'不明确,改为'other events'更合适。
× Writing things down make it seriously.
✓ Writing things down makes it serious.
主语'Writing things down'为单数,谓语动词应为'makes'。'seriously'应为形容词'serious'。
× So if something is really important for me, I might write down it and also use my calendar or reminder.
✓ So if something is really important to me, I might write it down and also use my calendar or reminders.
'write down it'应改为'write it down'。'important for me'习惯用法为'important to me'。'reminder'应为复数形式'reminders'。
× I just use something, uh, productivity app to keep things organized.
✓ I just use some productivity apps to keep things organized.
'something'用法不当,应改为'some'。'app'应为复数'apps'以匹配上下文。