Part 1
Giám khảo
Are you good at memorising things?
Thí sinh
Yes, I'm good at memorizing taxes because I can relate them with other contents, which makes them more memorable.
Giám khảo
Have you ever forgotten something important?
Thí sinh
Yes, I once forgot the exact time of my examination and I was very anxious about that but with my classmates help I was able to catch that exam.
Giám khảo
What do you need to remember in your daily life?
Thí sinh
I need to remember the daily tasks for my school and the routine I need to do, such as exercising.
Giám khảo
How do you remember important things?
Thí sinh
I often take a note to Remember Me of essential things, especially schoolwork or the deadline for my assignment.
Are you good at memorising things?
Điểm: 70.0Gợi ý: 你的回答虽然表达了记忆的技巧,但用词不够准确,'taxes' 应为 'texts',且句子结构稍显复杂,建议简化表达并使用更准确的词汇。
Ví dụ: Yes, I'm good at memorizing texts because I can relate them to other information, which helps me remember better.
Have you ever forgotten something important?
Điểm: 75.0Gợi ý: 回答内容具体,但句子较长且缺少适当的连接词,建议使用连接词使句子更流畅,同时注意冠词和复数形式的使用。
Ví dụ: Yes, I once forgot the exact time of my examination, and I was very anxious. However, with my classmates' help, I was able to attend the exam on time.
What do you need to remember in your daily life?
Điểm: 80.0Gợi ý: 回答简洁明了,但可以增加一些细节和连接词,使表达更自然流畅。
Ví dụ: I need to remember my daily school tasks and routines, such as exercising regularly to stay healthy.
How do you remember important things?
Điểm: 65.0Gợi ý: 表达不够自然,'take a note to Remember Me' 说法不正确,建议使用更地道的表达方式,并注意大小写和冠词的使用。
Ví dụ: I often take notes to remind myself of important things, especially schoolwork or assignment deadlines.
× Yes, I'm good at memorizing taxes because I can relate them with other contents, which makes them more memorable.
✓ Yes, I'm good at memorizing facts because I can relate them with other content, which makes them more memorable.
“taxes”应为“facts”,因为语境中应指“事实”而非“税收”;“contents”应为不可数名词“content”,表示内容。
× Yes, I once forgot the exact time of my examination and I was very anxious about that but with my classmates help I was able to catch that exam.
✓ Yes, I once forgot the exact time of my examination and I was very anxious about that, but with my classmates' help I was able to catch that exam.
“classmates help”缺少所有格,应为“classmates' help”,表示“同学们的帮助”。
× Yes, I once forgot the exact time of my examination and I was very anxious about that but with my classmates help I was able to catch that exam.
✓ Yes, I once forgot the exact time of my examination and I was very anxious about that, but with my classmates' help I was able to catch that exam.
“catch that exam”用词不当,英语中通常用“make it to the exam”或“attend the exam”,但此处保持原句结构,仅加标点。
× I often take a note to Remember Me of essential things, especially schoolwork or the deadline for my assignment.
✓ I often take a note to remind myself of essential things, especially schoolwork or the deadline for my assignment.
“Remember Me”用法错误,应为“remind myself”,表示“提醒我自己”。