Memory— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: คุณควรใช้ประโยคที่ถูกต้องและชัดเจนมากขึ้น เช่น ใช้ 'good at memorising' แทน 'good to memorize' และปรับคำพูดให้เป็นธรรมชาติมากขึ้น นอกจากนี้ควรหลีกเลี่ยงการใช้คำซ้ำซ้อนและเพิ่มคำเชื่อมเพื่อให้ประโยคลื่นไหล

Ví dụ: No, I'm not very good at memorising things. My friends often say that I tend to forget things easily. For example, sometimes I can't remember the date of tomorrow.

Gợi ý: ควรใช้โครงสร้างประโยคที่ถูกต้องและชัดเจน เช่น ใช้ 'forgot to go to class' แทน 'forgot to go to study' และหลีกเลี่ยงการพูดซ้ำซ้อน เช่น 'one day' ซ้ำสองครั้ง รวมถึงเพิ่มคำเชื่อมเพื่อความลื่นไหล

Ví dụ: Yes, I have forgotten something important before. For example, I once forgot to go to class, but another day I arrived early.

Gợi ý: ควรตอบโดยใช้ประโยคที่สมบูรณ์และเชื่อมโยงความคิด เช่น ใช้คำเชื่อมและขยายความให้ชัดเจนขึ้น เช่น 'I need to remember my work, studies, and family commitments every day'

Ví dụ: Every day, I need to remember my work tasks, study schedule, and family responsibilities.

Gợi ý: ควรใช้ประโยคที่ชัดเจนและเป็นธรรมชาติมากขึ้น เช่น 'I try to remember things in my mind, but if I can't, I write them down' และเพิ่มคำเชื่อมเพื่อความลื่นไหล

Ví dụ: I try to remember important things in my mind, but if I can't, I write them down in a notebook.

× No, I'm not really good to memorize seeing things.

✓ No, I'm not really good at memorizing things I see.

The phrase 'good to memorize' is incorrect; the correct preposition after 'good' in this context is 'at'. Also, 'memorizing' should be in the gerund form to function as a noun. 'Seeing things' is awkward; 'things I see' is clearer.

× My friend always tell me I'm really forgotten people.

✓ My friend always tells me I'm really forgetful.

The subject 'My friend' is singular, so the verb should be 'tells' not 'tell'. Also, 'forgotten people' is incorrect; the adjective 'forgetful' correctly describes a person who forgets things.

× For example, I can't remember what the date of tomorrow sometime.

✓ For example, sometimes I can't remember the date of tomorrow.

The sentence structure is awkward. 'Sometimes' should be placed at the beginning or before the verb. Also, 'what the date of tomorrow' is incorrect; it should be 'the date of tomorrow'.

× Sure, I have forgotten something important.

✓ Sure, I have forgotten something important.

This sentence is grammatically correct; no correction needed.

× For example, I forgot to go to study and one day I go to study early one day.

✓ For example, I forgot to go to study one day, and another day I went to study early.

The verb tenses should be consistent in past tense. 'Go' should be 'went' to match past tense. Also, the sentence is repetitive; 'one day' should not be repeated.

× Every day I just need to remember. Work and study and my family.

✓ Every day I just need to remember work, study, and my family.

The original sentence is fragmented. Combining the ideas into one sentence with proper punctuation improves clarity.

× I just remember in my brain, but if not I will take note.

✓ I just remember in my mind, but if not, I will take notes.

'Remember in my brain' is awkward; 'in my mind' is more natural. Also, 'take note' should be plural 'take notes' when referring to writing things down. A comma is needed after 'if not' for clarity.