Memory— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: 你的回答中存在语法错误和表达不自然的问题，建议简化句子结构，使用正确的时态和词汇，避免重复和冗余。可以先直接回答问题，然后用具体例子支持。

Ví dụ: Yes, I am good at memorising things. For example, I always remember the texts and portraits we studied in my Chinese lessons, even after a long time.

Gợi ý: 回答中语法错误较多，表达不够清晰。建议使用正确的时态和句型，逻辑更连贯，避免重复。可以先直接回答，再说明原因和结果。

Ví dụ: Yes, I once forgot an appointment with the dentist because I woke up too late that day. I apologized to the dentist, and it was a memorable experience for me.

Gợi ý: 回答中语法和表达不够准确，建议调整句子结构，使用正确的介词和词序，使表达更自然流畅。

Ví dụ: I need to remember the tasks I have to do every day and what meals I should eat next. Also, sometimes I need to remember the exact time and place to meet my friends.

Gợi ý: 回答表达基本清楚，但有语法错误和用词不当。建议注意时态一致，使用正确的介词和冠词，使句子更自然。

Ví dụ: Sometimes I write important things on paper or in books. However, I prefer to write them on my phone because it is more convenient, and I can check and remember them anytime.

× I was very doing, I doing well in our Chinese lessons.

✓ I was doing very well in our Chinese lessons.

这里动词使用错误，应该用动词的现在分词形式做进行时态的谓语，正确表达为"was doing"。

× I always remember those text or some portraits, very real, whatever long times.

✓ I always remember those texts or some portraits, very real, no matter how long ago.

名词复数形式使用错误，"text"应为复数"texts"，且表达时间长短应使用固定搭配"no matter how long ago"。

× I recall once a time I forgotten a appointment with dentist at that day I was get a got up too late and I forgotten these things after that.

✓ I recall one time I forgot an appointment with the dentist that day because I got up too late and forgot these things after that.

动词时态错误，"forgotten"应为过去式"forgot"，冠词使用错误，"a appointment"应为"an appointment"，"dentist"前应加定冠词"the"，"was get a got up"结构错误，应为"got up"。

× I apologize to that dentist and this is a very memorable experience for me.

✓ I apologized to that dentist and this was a very memorable experience for me.

动词时态应与上下文一致，过去时"apologized"更合适，"this is"应改为过去时"this was"。

× I need to remember what works should I do in every day and what meals I should eat in next time.

✓ I need to remember what work I should do every day and what meals I should eat next time.

"works"应为不可数名词"work"，"every day"作为副词短语不加介词，"in next time"错误，应为"next time"。

× And also sometimes I need remember to the exact point that my friends and me go out.

✓ And also sometimes I need to remember the exact time that my friends and I go out.

缺少不定式"to"，"point"用词不当，应为"time"，"my friends and me"主格应为"my friends and I"。

× Sometimes I always write them in my papers or books.

✓ I always write them in my papers or books sometimes.

副词"sometimes"和"always"位置冲突，建议调整副词位置使句子更自然。

× Although I will write them in my phone, it's more convenient than write them in the paper and I can check and remember them every time.

✓ Although I write them on my phone, it's more convenient than writing them on paper and I can check and remember them anytime.

"write in my phone"应为"write on my phone"，比较结构中动词应使用动名词"writing"，"in the paper"应为"on paper"，"every time"用法不当，改为"anytime"更合适。