Memory— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: Câu trả lời của bạn thiếu sự tự nhiên và có nhiều từ ngữ lặp lại, ngắt quãng (uh, I, I). Bạn nên trả lời trực tiếp, rõ ràng và tránh lặp từ. Ngoài ra, hãy sử dụng các từ nối để câu trả lời mạch lạc hơn và giới hạn câu trả lời trong 5 câu.

Ví dụ: I'm not very good at memorising things. For example, when I learn English, I find it hard to remember new vocabulary. However, I try to practice regularly to improve. This helps me use new words in daily conversations more easily.

Gợi ý: Bạn nên trả lời rõ ràng và tránh sử dụng các từ ngữ không cần thiết như 'uh' hay các câu không mạch lạc. Hãy sử dụng các từ nối để câu trả lời logic hơn và cung cấp chi tiết cụ thể hơn về việc quên đồ quan trọng.

Ví dụ: Yes, I have forgotten important things before. For instance, I often leave my phone behind, which is problematic because I rely on it for work emails and contacts. This causes inconvenience and stress when I realize it's missing.

Gợi ý: Câu trả lời của bạn khá tốt nhưng có một số lỗi ngữ pháp và câu chưa hoàn chỉnh. Bạn nên sử dụng câu hoàn chỉnh, tránh lặp từ và dùng từ nối để câu trả lời mạch lạc hơn.

Ví dụ: In my daily life, I need to remember my mobile phone. I consider it my technology assistant because I use it for work, social connections, and reminders for meetings. Without it, I would find it difficult to manage my schedule.

Gợi ý: Bạn nên trả lời rõ ràng hơn, tránh câu không hoàn chỉnh và sử dụng từ ngữ phù hợp. Hãy dùng các từ nối để câu trả lời mạch lạc và cung cấp chi tiết cụ thể hơn về cách bạn ghi nhớ.

Ví dụ: It depends on the situation. For example, when I learn new vocabulary, I read and listen to podcasts at night to help my brain remember. Additionally, I sometimes write notes to reinforce my memory.

× Well, I don't consider my memorizing ability, It's very outstanding.

✓ Well, I don't consider my memorizing ability to be very outstanding.

The sentence is missing the verb 'to be' after 'consider' to correctly link the subject and complement. The phrase 'consider my memorizing ability, It's very outstanding' is incorrect because it improperly connects two independent clauses with a comma instead of a conjunction or proper structure.

× I need to learn some, uh, voca, new vocabulary and new word to, uh, use it for the common conversation.

✓ I need to learn some new vocabulary and new words to use for common conversation.

The word 'word' should be plural 'words' to match 'some' and 'new vocabulary' which is uncountable. Also, 'use it' is incorrect because 'words' is plural, so 'use them' or just 'use' without 'it' is better. The phrase 'the common conversation' should be 'common conversation' without 'the'.

× I cannot remember easily and uh.

✓ I cannot remember things easily.

The sentence is incomplete and lacks an object after 'remember'. Adding 'things' clarifies what cannot be remembered. Also, 'easily' should be placed after the object for correct adverb placement.

× My friend always shocked me as a Tory face from Finding Nemo, you know, uh, for example, I frequently, uh, leave my phone behind, which is a big problem since I rely on it almost everything, my contact working e-mail or uh, anything so, so connection as well.

✓ My friend always shocks me with a worried face like Dory from Finding Nemo. For example, I frequently leave my phone behind, which is a big problem since I rely on it for almost everything: my contacts, work emails, or anything related to communication.

'Shocked' should be 'shocks' to agree with 'my friend' in present tense. 'Tory' is a mispronunciation of 'Dory'. 'As a Tory face' is incorrect; 'with a worried face like Dory' is clearer. 'Almost everything' needs a preposition 'for'. 'My contact working e-mail or anything so, so connection' is unclear and should be rephrased to 'my contacts, work emails, or anything related to communication'.

× Well, it must be a thing, so should be my mobile phone.

✓ Well, it must be one thing, and that should be my mobile phone.

'A thing' is vague; 'one thing' is clearer. The phrase 'so should be my mobile phone' is incorrect; it should be 'and that should be my mobile phone' to connect the ideas properly.

× I sometimes consider my my phone is just like my technology assistant because I rely on it for so many purposes, for example, working, social connection and something along those lines.

✓ I sometimes consider my phone to be just like my technology assistant because I rely on it for many purposes, for example, work, social connections, and things along those lines.

'My my phone' is a repetition error. 'Consider my phone is' should be 'consider my phone to be'. 'So many purposes' is better as 'many purposes'. 'Working' should be 'work' to match the noun form. 'Social connection' should be plural 'social connections'.

× And yes, alarming reminder for my schedule, for my meeting, something.

✓ And yes, it gives me alarming reminders for my schedule, meetings, and similar things.

The original sentence lacks a subject and verb. 'Alarming reminder' should be plural 'reminders' to match 'schedule' and 'meeting'. 'Something' is vague and should be replaced with 'similar things' or omitted.

× It depends I think.

✓ I think it depends.

The phrase 'It depends I think' is awkward. The correct word order is 'I think it depends' to clearly express the opinion.

× If I learn a new language and must memorize the new vocabulary, I often read and listen to the podcast at night and just let my hippocampus to remember all the things for me and start it in my brain.

✓ If I learn a new language and must memorize new vocabulary, I often read and listen to podcasts at night and just let my hippocampus remember everything for me and store it in my brain.

'The new vocabulary' should be 'new vocabulary' without 'the'. 'The podcast' should be plural 'podcasts' to indicate multiple or general listening. 'Let my hippocampus to remember' is incorrect; 'let' is followed by the base verb without 'to'. 'Start it in my brain' is unclear; 'store it in my brain' is more accurate.

× And sometimes I write down a note to.

✓ And sometimes I write down a note too.

The sentence ends abruptly with 'to' which is incorrect. The correct word is 'too' meaning 'also' to complete the sentence properly.