Memory— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: Your answer is somewhat repetitive and contains grammatical errors. Try to be more concise and use correct verb forms. Also, avoid filler words like 'uh' and be clear about your methods. For example, you can say, 'I am not very good at memorising things, but I am learning techniques like yogasanas and meditation to improve my memory.'

Ví dụ: I am not very good at memorising things, but I am learning techniques like yogasanas and meditation to improve my memory.

Gợi ý: Your answer is unclear and has grammatical mistakes. Try to answer directly and use linking words to make your response coherent. For example, say, 'I sometimes forget unimportant things, but I always remember important ones because they are crucial in my life.'

Ví dụ: I sometimes forget unimportant things, but I always remember important ones because they are crucial in my life.

Gợi ý: Your answer is relevant but can be improved by avoiding repetition and using linking words for coherence. Also, try to be more specific. For example, 'In my daily life, I need to remember to take my medicine and meals on time. Additionally, I must keep track of my schedule and stay focused on my future goals.'

Ví dụ: In my daily life, I need to remember to take my medicine and meals on time. Additionally, I must keep track of my schedule and stay focused on my future goals.

Gợi ý: Your answer is confusing and contains many hesitations. Try to structure your answer clearly and use linking words. For example, 'I usually try to remember important things mentally, but if I think I might forget, I write them down in my notebook or phone calendar.'

Ví dụ: I usually try to remember important things mentally, but if I think I might forget, I write them down in my notebook or phone calendar.

× And uh, I also trying to do some yogasanas to learn to memorize more unlike meditations etcetera.

✓ And uh, I am also trying to do some yogasanas to learn to memorize more, unlike meditations etcetera.

The sentence is missing the auxiliary verb 'am' before the verb in -ing form 'trying'. In English, the present continuous tense requires the verb 'to be' (am/is/are) plus the verb ending in -ing. Here, 'I also trying' should be 'I am also trying'.

× Actually, I have a forgotten, I mean I can forgot everything easily but when it comes to important things, I get to remember everything and I don't get forgot about those important things.

✓ Actually, I have forgotten, I mean I can forget everything easily but when it comes to important things, I remember everything and I don't forget those important things.

The phrase 'I have a forgotten' is incorrect; the correct past participle form is 'I have forgotten' without 'a'. Also, 'I can forgot' is wrong because 'forgot' is past tense; the base form 'forget' should be used after 'can'. Similarly, 'I get to remember' is awkward; 'I remember' is better. 'I don't get forgot' is incorrect; it should be 'I don't forget'. These corrections align with proper use of past participle and present tense forms.

× In my daily life, I need to remember about that.

✓ In my daily life, I need to remember that.

The verb 'remember' does not require the preposition 'about' when followed by a direct object. Saying 'remember about that' is incorrect; the correct form is 'remember that'.

× I need to be consistent to my future goals.

✓ I need to be consistent with my future goals.

The adjective 'consistent' is followed by the preposition 'with', not 'to'. Therefore, 'consistent to my future goals' should be corrected to 'consistent with my future goals'.

× I just remember it by my mind or else sometimes if I get, if I tend to forget that if I mean I did, I think, I think that I can forget that then absolutely I can write it on my notebook or else on my calendar on phone.

✓ I just remember it in my mind, but sometimes if I tend to forget, I write it in my notebook or on the calendar on my phone.

The original sentence is convoluted and contains redundant and unclear phrases. 'Remember it by my mind' is better expressed as 'remember it in my mind'. The phrase 'if I get, if I tend to forget that if I mean I did' is confusing and should be simplified to 'sometimes if I tend to forget'. Also, 'write it on my notebook' should be 'write it in my notebook'. The corrected sentence is clearer and grammatically correct.