Part 1
Giám khảo
Are you good at memorising things?
Thí sinh
No, I don't think I'm good at memorizing things because I often forget details easily. For example, let's study for exams. I like to write detailed notes because it can help me understand the material better and remember it for longer. Taking notes also allows me to review important points.
Giám khảo
Have you ever forgotten something important?
Thí sinh
Yes, I have forgotten something important before, but usually I try to avoid this by writing notes. For example, if I have an important meeting or appointment, I always check my note to remind myself. This method really helped me improve my memory.
Giám khảo
What do you need to remember in your daily life?
Thí sinh
I think in my daily life I, I should stay organized and manage time effective. Also include, umm, do the guidelines because, uh, it uh, because keeping to do this is help me, uh, better to remember the same.
Giám khảo
How do you remember important things?
Thí sinh
I usually make a list on my phone because it's very convenient and I can check it anytime. Sometimes I also write note on paper since it's easier to find the and review them quickly. This way I can remember important things more effectively.
Are you good at memorising things?
Điểm: 85.0Gợi ý: 你的回答内容较为完整,但部分表达不够自然,且有些句子结构略显重复。建议简化表达,避免冗余,同时使用更多连词使句子更流畅。
Ví dụ: No, I'm not very good at memorizing things because I tend to forget details easily. However, when I study for exams, I write detailed notes, which help me understand and remember the material better. This method also allows me to review important points effectively.
Have you ever forgotten something important?
Điểm: 90.0Gợi ý: 回答较为清晰,但可以增加更多细节和连词,使表达更连贯自然。建议在描述方法时加入原因或效果的说明。
Ví dụ: Yes, I have forgotten important things before, but I usually avoid this by writing notes. For instance, if I have a meeting or appointment, I check my notes regularly, which helps me remember better and avoid missing important events.
What do you need to remember in your daily life?
Điểm: 60.0Gợi ý: 回答中存在较多语法错误和口语填充词,表达不清晰。建议练习简洁明了的句子结构,减少重复和犹豫词,提升表达流畅度。
Ví dụ: In my daily life, I need to stay organized and manage my time effectively. Following routines and guidelines helps me remember tasks better and stay on track.
How do you remember important things?
Điểm: 88.0Gợi ý: 回答内容完整且表达较自然,但有小的语法错误和词汇使用不当。建议注意单复数形式和冠词的正确使用,提升语言准确性。
Ví dụ: I usually make a list on my phone because it's very convenient and I can check it anytime. Sometimes, I also write notes on paper since it's easier to find and review them quickly. This method helps me remember important things more effectively.
× For example, let's study for exams.
✓ For example, when studying for exams.
此处应使用动名词短语作状语,表示“在复习考试时”,而不是祈使句“让我们学习考试”。
× I always check my note to remind myself.
✓ I always check my notes to remind myself.
“note”应为复数形式“notes”,因为通常会有多条笔记。
× I should stay organized and manage time effective.
✓ I should stay organized and manage time effectively.
“effective”是形容词,修饰动词“manage”应使用副词“effectively”。
× Also include, umm, do the guidelines because, uh, it uh, because keeping to do this is help me, uh, better to remember the same.
✓ Also, I follow the guidelines because keeping to them helps me remember better.
原句结构混乱,缺少主语和谓语,且表达不清晰,需调整为完整且通顺的句子。
× Sometimes I also write note on paper since it's easier to find the and review them quickly.
✓ Sometimes I also write notes on paper since it's easier to find and review them quickly.
“note”应为复数形式“notes”,且原句中“the”多余,应删除。