Memory— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: Câu trả lời của bạn thiếu sự tự nhiên và có nhiều lỗi ngữ pháp, làm giảm tính hiệu quả. Bạn nên trả lời trực tiếp câu hỏi, sử dụng câu đơn giản, rõ ràng và tránh lặp từ. Ngoài ra, nên dùng các liên từ để câu trả lời mạch lạc hơn.

Ví dụ: Yes, I am quite good at memorising things. However, I have had some difficulties since childhood because of a brain condition. Despite this, I try to improve my memory by practicing regularly.

Gợi ý: Bạn nên trả lời trực tiếp và rõ ràng hơn, tránh lỗi ngữ pháp và sử dụng từ vựng phù hợp. Hãy dùng liên từ để kết nối ý và cung cấp ví dụ cụ thể để làm câu trả lời sinh động hơn.

Ví dụ: No, I have never forgotten anything important because I usually write down important information in my notes. For example, I always review my notes before exams to make sure I remember everything.

Gợi ý: Câu trả lời của bạn khá rõ ràng nhưng có thể cải thiện bằng cách sử dụng thêm liên từ để câu văn mạch lạc hơn và tránh lặp từ. Bạn cũng nên thêm một vài chi tiết cụ thể hơn để làm câu trả lời sinh động.

Ví dụ: In my daily life, I need to remember many difficult definitions and concepts from subjects like physics, science, literature, and math because they are important for my studies. However, during the summer, I mainly focus on remembering to do housework and other daily chores.

Gợi ý: Bạn nên sử dụng câu trả lời rõ ràng, tránh lỗi ngữ pháp và dùng liên từ để câu trả lời mạch lạc hơn. Ngoài ra, câu cuối cùng không rõ nghĩa, bạn nên diễn đạt lại cho dễ hiểu và cụ thể hơn.

Ví dụ: I usually take notes because it helps me remember important information. For example, during extra classes, I write down key points so I can review them later. My teacher also advised me to focus on understanding rather than just memorizing.

× Yes, I good at memorizing things.

✓ Yes, I am good at memorizing things.

The sentence is missing the verb 'am' to form the present tense of the verb 'to be'. In English, the verb 'to be' is required to link the subject and the adjective. The correct form is 'I am good'.

× When I was a kid, I have to go to the doctor and he said that I have had problems with my brains, so it affects my memorizing a lot.

✓ When I was a kid, I had to go to the doctor and he said that I had problems with my brain, so it affected my memorizing a lot.

The sentence mixes past and present perfect tenses incorrectly. 'Have to' should be in past tense 'had to' to match 'When I was a kid'. 'Have had' should be 'had' to indicate past condition. 'Brains' should be singular 'brain' as it refers to one organ. 'Affects' should be 'affected' to maintain past tense consistency.

× In the future, if I want to memorize various things, I feel I will feel very difficult and I can't motivate it myself.

✓ In the future, if I want to memorize various things, I feel it will be very difficult and I can't motivate myself.

The phrase 'I will feel very difficult' is incorrect; 'it will be very difficult' is correct because 'difficult' describes the situation, not the person. Also, 'motivate it myself' is incorrect; the correct phrase is 'motivate myself' because 'motivate' is reflexive here.

× No, I haven't ever forgotten something important because I knew that I know that I have bad physically memorized.

✓ No, I have never forgotten anything important because I know that I have poor physical memory.

'Haven't ever' is better expressed as 'have never'. 'Knew that I know' is contradictory; it should be 'I know'. 'Have bad physically memorized' is incorrect; the correct phrase is 'have poor physical memory'.

× So when I need to memorize something, I would love to write it in my notes and I watch my notes to complete all the subjects that I need.

✓ So when I need to memorize something, I like to write it in my notes and I review my notes to complete all the subjects that I need.

'Would love to' is more about desire and less about habitual action; 'like to' fits better here. 'I watch my notes' is incorrect; the correct verb is 'review' or 'look over' notes.

× In my daily life, I need to remember many difficult definitions and concepts from subjects like physics, science, literature and math because they are very important for my studies.

✓ In my daily life, I need to remember many difficult definitions and concepts from subjects like physics, science, literature, and math because they are very important for my studies.

The sentence is mostly correct; only a missing comma after 'literature' is added for clarity.

× But during the summer, I don't need to memorize anything in my daily life except remember to do housework.

✓ But during the summer, I don't need to memorize anything in my daily life except remember to do housework.

The sentence is grammatically correct; no change needed.

× Well, I usually take notes in my notes packs because it's easier for me to remember important things.

✓ Well, I usually take notes in my notebook because it's easier for me to remember important things.

'Notes packs' is not a correct phrase; the correct term is 'notebook' or 'notebooks'.

× For example, when I have to go to the extra classes, I usually take notes about the important lessons that I need to remember.

✓ For example, when I have to go to extra classes, I usually take notes on the important lessons that I need to remember.

'The extra classes' should be 'extra classes' without 'the' because it refers to classes in general. 'Take notes about' is better expressed as 'take notes on'.

× As my teacher has said, and it's helped me, don't remember anything that teaches.

✓ As my teacher has said, and it has helped me, don't try to memorize everything that is taught.

The original sentence is unclear and ungrammatical. 'Don't remember anything that teaches' is incorrect; the intended meaning is likely 'don't try to memorize everything that is taught'. Also, 'it's helped me' should be 'it has helped me' for clarity.