Memory— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: Perbaiki struktur kalimat dan hindari pengulangan kata yang tidak perlu. Gunakan kalimat yang lebih jelas dan langsung menjawab pertanyaan dengan detail yang relevan.

Ví dụ: Yes, I am quite good at memorizing things. For example, I can easily recall important dates and events from my past experiences, which helps me in my daily life.

Gợi ý: Perjelas kalimat dan gunakan struktur yang lebih teratur. Hindari pengulangan dan gunakan kata penghubung untuk membuat jawaban lebih koheren.

Ví dụ: No, I have never forgotten anything important. However, I sometimes misplace less important items like my glasses or phone, which can be frustrating.

Gợi ý: Perbaiki tata bahasa dan gunakan kalimat yang lebih jelas dan terstruktur. Jelaskan dengan detail tugas yang harus diingat dan dampaknya secara spesifik.

Ví dụ: As an employee, I need to remember my daily tasks and deadlines carefully because they directly affect the workflow and success of my company.

Gợi ý: Perbaiki tata bahasa dan gunakan kalimat yang lebih alami serta koheren. Jelaskan metode yang digunakan dengan contoh yang spesifik.

Ví dụ: I usually write important tasks as notes on my phone or laptop. This way, when I check my device, the reminders help me stay on track and complete my duties on time.

× I can't remember every details of the event or cases that actually happened in the past.

✓ I can't remember every detail of the event or case that actually happened in the past.

The word 'every' is followed by a singular noun, so 'details' and 'cases' should be singular as 'detail' and 'case'. Penggunaan 'every' harus diikuti oleh kata benda tunggal, jadi 'details' dan 'cases' harus diubah menjadi bentuk tunggal 'detail' dan 'case'.

× No, I've never forgotten something important, but I usually forget some not really important things like my glasses where I put it before all my my back or my phone.

✓ No, I've never forgotten something important, but I usually forget some not really important things like where I put my glasses, my bag, or my phone.

The pronoun 'it' is incorrectly used referring to 'glasses' which is plural, and the phrase 'all my my back' is unclear and likely a mistake for 'my bag'. The sentence is corrected for clarity and proper pronoun use. Penggunaan kata ganti 'it' tidak tepat karena 'glasses' jamak, dan frasa 'all my my back' tidak jelas dan kemungkinan salah ketik dari 'my bag'. Kalimat diperbaiki untuk kejelasan dan penggunaan kata ganti yang benar.

× Because I am a worker, so I think the most important thing I need to remember in my daily life is my duty in my daily tax.

✓ Because I am a worker, I think the most important thing I need to remember in my daily life is my duty in my daily tasks.

The preposition 'in' is incorrectly used with 'daily tax'; it should be 'daily tasks' to convey the intended meaning. Preposisi 'in' tidak tepat digunakan dengan 'daily tax'; seharusnya 'daily tasks' untuk menyampaikan makna yang dimaksud.

× But I have to do today and what I have to do tomorrow and the day after tomorrow because it can effect our company flow.

✓ But what I have to do today, tomorrow, and the day after tomorrow because it can affect our company flow.

The verb 'effect' is incorrectly used; the correct verb is 'affect'. Also, the sentence structure is improved for clarity. Kata kerja 'effect' digunakan tidak tepat; kata kerja yang benar adalah 'affect'. Selain itu, struktur kalimat diperbaiki untuk kejelasan.

× I usually make a note in my phone or my desktop laptop and it very helpful because when I open my phone the reminder remind me that something important must be done.

✓ I usually make a note on my phone or my desktop laptop and it is very helpful because when I open my phone, the reminder reminds me that something important must be done.

The pronoun 'it' needs the verb 'is' to be grammatically correct. Also, 'remind' should be 'reminds' to agree with the singular subject 'reminder'. Preposition 'in' is corrected to 'on' for devices. Kata ganti 'it' membutuhkan kata kerja 'is' agar secara tata bahasa benar. Selain itu, 'remind' harus 'reminds' untuk sesuai dengan subjek tunggal 'reminder'. Preposisi 'in' diperbaiki menjadi 'on' untuk perangkat.