Part 1
Giám khảo
Are you good at memorising things?
Thí sinh
Yes, of course I am good at memorizing things. I remember one day my mom and me going to the supermarket but my mom forgot what items should we buy or what vegetables should we buy and I mentioned that.
Giám khảo
Have you ever forgotten something important?
Thí sinh
Yeah, I've never forgotten something important. For example, one day at the weekend. So as these days I have a test, but I forgot to take my student card or passport, so I didn't write.
Giám khảo
What do you need to remember in your daily life?
Thí sinh
So I need to remember clean the house and using the the wrap, cleaning wrap and cleaning the desk and grab the trash items.
Giám khảo
How do you remember important things?
Thí sinh
I will writing the important things that I should remember on the notebook so when I forgot I can open the notebook and see what I should remember.
Are you good at memorising things?
Điểm: 60.0Gợi ý: 回答时语法和表达不够自然,句子结构混乱,缺少连贯的连接词。建议简化句子结构,使用更自然的表达方式,并注意主谓一致。
Ví dụ: Yes, I am quite good at memorizing things. For example, once when my mom forgot the shopping list at the supermarket, I was able to remind her of the vegetables we needed to buy.
Have you ever forgotten something important?
Điểm: 50.0Gợi ý: 回答内容前后矛盾,表达不清晰,语法错误较多。建议先明确回答问题,然后用具体例子支持,注意时态和句子完整性。
Ví dụ: Yes, I have forgotten something important before. For instance, last weekend I had a test but I forgot to bring my student card, so I was not allowed to take the exam.
What do you need to remember in your daily life?
Điểm: 55.0Gợi ý: 回答不够连贯,表达不自然,词汇使用重复且不准确。建议使用更准确的词汇,句子结构更完整,并使用连接词使表达更流畅。
Ví dụ: In my daily life, I need to remember to clean the house, wipe the desk with cleaning cloth, and take out the trash regularly.
How do you remember important things?
Điểm: 65.0Gợi ý: 语法错误影响表达清晰度,句子结构不够自然。建议使用正确的时态和更简洁的表达方式。
Ví dụ: I write important things in my notebook, so if I forget something, I can check it to remind myself.
× I remember one day my mom and me going to the supermarket but my mom forgot what items should we buy or what vegetables should we buy and I mentioned that.
✓ I remember one day my mom and I going to the supermarket but my mom forgot what items we should buy or what vegetables we should buy and I mentioned that.
这里“my mom and me”用作主语时应使用主格“I”,所以改为“my mom and I”。另外,间接疑问句中语序应为“we should buy”,而不是“should we buy”。
× Yeah, I've never forgotten something important.
✓ Yeah, I've never forgotten anything important.
这里用“never forgotten something”不太自然,通常用“never forgotten anything”表示否定含义。
× For example, one day at the weekend. So as these days I have a test, but I forgot to take my student card or passport, so I didn't write.
✓ For example, one day at the weekend, I had a test, but I forgot to take my student card or passport, so I didn't write it.
句子缺少谓语,需补充“had a test”。“didn't write”后应加宾语“it”以完整表达。
× So I need to remember clean the house and using the the wrap, cleaning wrap and cleaning the desk and grab the trash items.
✓ So I need to remember to clean the house, use the wrap, clean the desk, and take out the trash.
动词“remember”后应接不定式“to clean”,而不是动名词形式。句中“using the the wrap”重复且用法错误,应改为“use the wrap”。
× I will writing the important things that I should remember on the notebook so when I forgot I can open the notebook and see what I should remember.
✓ I will write the important things that I should remember in the notebook so when I forget, I can open the notebook and see what I should remember.
“will”后应接动词原形“write”,而不是“writing”。“on the notebook”应改为“in the notebook”,因为内容写在笔记本里。时态应统一,改“forgot”为“forget”。