Memory— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: 回答中存在语法错误，如“it can helps me”应为“it helps me”，且表达略显重复和不够自然。建议简化表达，避免冗余，同时注意语法准确。

Ví dụ: I'm not very good at memorizing things naturally. However, I often take photos to help me remember special moments later.

Gợi ý: 回答中表达不够连贯，且“depressed”用词不当，语法和逻辑有待加强。建议使用更合适的词汇，并用连接词使表达更流畅。

Ví dụ: Yes, once I forgot my ID card at the airport. I felt very embarrassed because it was essential for my travel, and without it, I couldn't board the plane.

Gợi ý: 回答中“orders for academic performance”表达不清晰，且句子结构不够自然。建议使用更准确的词汇，并简洁明了地表达观点。

Ví dụ: In my daily life, I need to remember important deadlines for exams and assignments because staying organized helps me perform better academically.

Gợi ý: 回答中存在语法错误，如“messaging”应为“message”，且表达不够连贯。建议使用连接词并注意语法准确，同时避免不必要的信息。

Ví dụ: I usually write important things down on paper and save reminders on my phone. Sometimes, I also ask my friends to remind me if needed.

× However, I have kept the habit of capturing photos of every momentary moment so that it can helps me to memorize some cherished moments later on.

✓ However, I have kept the habit of capturing photos of every momentary moment so that it can help me to memorize some cherished moments later on.

这里的主语是单数的 'it'，谓语动词 'helps' 应该用原形 'help'，因为情态动词 'can' 后面跟动词原形。动词形式错误属于单复数问题。

× You know, that time I felt quite embarrassed and depressed because ID card is quite essential for me and I can't live without that.

✓ You know, that time I felt quite embarrassed and depressed because my ID card is quite essential for me and I can't live without it.

这里 'ID card' 是单数，前面缺少冠词 'my'，并且代词 'that' 应该用 'it' 来指代单数物品。冠词和代词使用错误属于单复数问题。

× Otherwise I can't participate in the plan.

✓ Otherwise I can't participate in the plan.

此句无语法错误，保持原句。

× In my daily life, I think I need to remember some orders for academic performance.

✓ In my daily life, I think I need to remember some orders for academic performances.

'academic performance' 应为复数形式 'academic performances'，因为指多个学业表现或任务。

× It is quite essential for young people to stay organized when they finish some academic performance like examination and assignments.

✓ It is quite essential for young people to stay organized when they finish some academic performances like examinations and assignments.

'academic performance' 和 'examination' 应该用复数形式 'academic performances' 和 'examinations'，因为指多个考试和任务。

× Also I will keep it in my mobile phone and messaging my friends so that they can remind me to recycle and remember this important things.

✓ Also I will keep it in my mobile phone and message my friends so that they can remind me to recycle and remember these important things.

'messaging' 应改为动词原形 'message'，'this important things' 中 'this' 应改为复数指示代词 'these'，因为 'things' 是复数。