Memory— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: Your answer is generally clear and relevant, but it could be more concise and natural. Avoid repeating phrases like "I think" and try to use linking words to connect ideas smoothly. Also, watch for minor grammar issues such as tense consistency and article usage. Try to limit your answer to about 4-5 sentences for better effectiveness.

Ví dụ: Yes, I am good at memorizing things. For example, as a child, I used to remember all my relatives' birthdays and phone numbers. Even now, I can recall important dates and events, whether they have already happened or are upcoming. This shows that I have a strong memory.

Gợi ý: Your answer addresses the question but could be improved by using more varied vocabulary and linking words to make the response smoother. Avoid repeating "but" at the beginning of sentences and try to provide more specific details about the situation. Also, try to combine sentences to avoid redundancy.

Ví dụ: Yes, I have forgotten something important before. For instance, last week at work, I forgot to fax the lab requisition, which is usually done on Wednesdays. Fortunately, the work clerk noticed this the next morning and took care of it, so there was no problem.

Gợi ý: Your answer is relevant but contains some grammar mistakes and awkward phrasing, such as "make a lust" instead of "make a list." Try to use correct expressions and linking words to improve clarity. Also, avoid redundancy and keep your answer concise and natural.

Ví dụ: In my daily life, I need to remember my tasks and appointments. To help with this, I always make a list in my work diary before starting the day. This habit helps me stay organized and ensures I don't forget important things.

Gợi ý: Your answer is clear but could be improved by avoiding repetition and using more natural phrasing. For example, instead of "I have already told you," simply state your methods. Also, use linking words to connect ideas and check for grammar, such as "write it in my diary" and "helps me remember."

Ví dụ: I usually remember important things by making a list before starting work. At home, if I have tasks on specific dates, I write them in my diary and sometimes add reminders to my phone's calendar. These methods help me stay organized and remember important events.

× I think yes, I'm good at memorizing things.

✓ I think so, I'm good at memorizing things.

The phrase 'I think yes' is not idiomatic in English. The correct modal expression is 'I think so' to affirm a positive statement.

× And even now, if I can say I remember all the birthdays and special events, which is already happened or which is going to happen, I have a good memory, I think.

✓ And even now, I can say I remember all the birthdays and special events, which have already happened or which are going to happen; I have a good memory, I think.

The phrase 'which is already happened' is incorrect because 'happened' is a past participle and requires the auxiliary verb 'have' to form the present perfect tense. Also, 'which is going to happen' should agree in number with 'events' and be 'which are going to happen.'

× Yes, I forgot.

✓ Yes, I forgot.

This sentence is grammatically correct; no correction needed.

× Usually on Wednesdays we have to fax the lab requisition to the lab umm center.

✓ Usually on Wednesdays, we have to fax the lab requisition to the lab centre.

Adding a comma after 'Wednesdays' improves clarity. Also, 'umm' is a hesitation filler and should be omitted in formal speech. 'Center' is acceptable in American English, but 'centre' is Canadian English spelling.

× But I forgot that night.

✓ But I forgot that night.

This sentence is correct; no correction needed.

× But the next morning the work clerk followed with that and she did it.

✓ But the next morning, the work clerk followed up on that and she did it.

The phrase 'followed with that' is incorrect. The correct phrasal verb is 'followed up on that' to indicate taking action regarding a previous matter.

× It is my habit that I make a lust before I start my work.

✓ It is my habit to make a list before I start my work.

The word 'lust' is a typo and should be 'list.' Also, the phrase 'that I make a list' is better expressed as 'to make a list' to indicate habitual action.

× I have a diary at work where I just make a list of what I have to do today and that helped me to not to forget things and to remember my tasks.

✓ I have a diary at work where I make a list of what I have to do today, and that helps me not to forget things and to remember my tasks.

The verb tense should be present 'helps' to match the habitual action. Also, 'to not to forget' is incorrect; it should be 'not to forget.' The word 'just' is unnecessary and can be omitted for clarity.

× Like I I have already told you that I always make a list before I start my work and even at home if I have to do important work on a specific date, I usually write it on diary and sometimes I add it to my calendar in the phone as well which helps me to remind it.

✓ As I have already told you, I always make a list before I start my work, and even at home, if I have important work on a specific date, I usually write it in my diary and sometimes add it to my phone calendar as well, which helps me remember it.

The phrase 'Like I I have' contains a repeated word and should be 'As I have.' The phrase 'write it on diary' is incorrect; the correct preposition is 'in my diary.' 'Add it to my calendar in the phone' is better expressed as 'add it to my phone calendar.' The phrase 'helps me to remind it' is incorrect; it should be 'helps me remember it.'