Part 1
Giám khảo
Are you good at memorising things?
Thí sinh
Yes, I'm pretty good at memorizing information. I will use techniques like repeating information aloud or reading out things so it's easier for me to remember it and I also need to follow the.
Giám khảo
Have you ever forgotten something important?
Thí sinh
Yes, I always forget important things, from information about my textbooks to the exam contains to a plan of buying groceries. I even forgot a meeting with my friend which ****** her off. So yeah, of course I.
Giám khảo
What do you need to remember in your daily life?
Thí sinh
What I need to buy like I won't keep a list of groceries that I need to buy vegetables, fruits, dairies and also I would like to do's and also my daily plan, plan my routines or like when I need to hit the gym and when I need to go to the library.
Giám khảo
How do you remember important things?
Thí sinh
By reading them aloud and repeating again and again. For example, if I need to prepare for an exam, I would take information from my textbooks and write it down onto notability and I would read it out and also use mind maths.
Are you good at memorising things?
Điểm: 65.0Gợi ý: 回答时语言较为自然,但句子结构不完整,表达不够清晰,且最后一句话未完成。建议回答时注意句子完整性,避免语法错误,并且可以适当丰富细节,使回答更具体。
Ví dụ: Yes, I am quite good at memorising things. For example, I often repeat information aloud or read it several times, which helps me remember it better.
Have you ever forgotten something important?
Điểm: 50.0Gợi ý: 回答中存在语法错误和表达不清晰的问题,且句子未完成。建议回答时注意语法准确,句子完整,并且提供具体的例子来支持观点。
Ví dụ: Yes, I have forgotten important things before. For instance, I once forgot a meeting with my friend, which made her upset.
What do you need to remember in your daily life?
Điểm: 55.0Gợi ý: 回答内容较为混乱,句子结构不清晰,缺乏连贯性。建议回答时先给出主题句,然后用连词连接具体细节,使表达更流畅。
Ví dụ: In my daily life, I need to remember to buy groceries such as vegetables, fruits, and dairy products. Besides that, I also keep track of my daily plans, like when to go to the gym or visit the library.
How do you remember important things?
Điểm: 70.0Gợi ý: 回答较为自然且内容具体,但部分表达不够准确,如“mind maths”可能是“mind maps”。建议注意用词准确,并适当丰富细节。
Ví dụ: I remember important things by reading them aloud and repeating them several times. For example, when preparing for an exam, I write key points in my notebook and use mind maps to organize the information.
× I will use techniques like repeating information aloud or reading out things so it's easier for me to remember it and I also need to follow the.
✓ I use techniques like repeating information aloud or reading things out so it's easier for me to remember, and I also need to follow them.
句中使用了将来时态“will use”,但描述的是习惯性动作,应使用一般现在时。此外,句尾“follow the”不完整,应补充宾语。建议将“will use”改为“use”,并补全句子。
× I even forgot a meeting with my friend which ****** her off.
✓ I even forgot a meeting with my friend which upset her.
句中“forgot”是过去时,符合语境,但“******”部分缺失,推测应为“upset”,表示使她生气。需要补全动词以表达完整意思。
× I won't keep a list of groceries that I need to buy vegetables, fruits, dairies and also I would like to do's and also my daily plan, plan my routines or like when I need to hit the gym and when I need to go to the library.
✓ I keep a list of groceries that I need to buy: vegetables, fruits, dairy products, and also my to-dos and daily plans, like when I need to hit the gym and when I need to go to the library.
句中“won't keep”与语境不符,应为习惯性动作用一般现在时“keep”。“dairies”应为“dairy products”或“dairy”。“do's”应为“to-dos”。句子结构混乱,需调整顺序使表达清晰。
× By reading them aloud and repeating again and again.
✓ I remember important things by reading them aloud and repeating them again and again.
原句为片段句,缺少主语和谓语,需补充完整句子。
× For example, if I need to prepare for an exam, I would take information from my textbooks and write it down onto notability and I would read it out and also use mind maths.
✓ For example, if I need to prepare for an exam, I take information from my textbooks, write it down on Notability, read it out, and also use mind maps.
条件句中“if I need”是一般现在时,主句应使用一般现在时“take”,而非“would take”。“notability”应为专有名词首字母大写,“mind maths”应为“mind maps”。