Memory— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: 你的回答表达了观点并给出了具体例子，但有些句子结构重复且略显冗长。建议简化表达，避免重复，并使用更多连接词使句子更流畅。

Ví dụ: Yes, I am quite good at memorizing certain things, especially places I have visited, like landmarks from my trips. However, I find it harder to remember academic subjects such as social studies because they are more complex.

Gợi ý: 你的回答内容具体且有逻辑，但句子较长且部分表达重复。建议使用连接词分割句子，使表达更清晰自然。

Ví dụ: Yes, during my first year at university, I forgot the deadline for a homework assignment. As a result, I submitted it late, which lowered my final score. This experience taught me to manage my time more carefully.

Gợi ý: 回答内容具体，但开头“Actually”使用频繁且句子结构简单。建议丰富词汇，使用更多连接词，使表达更自然流畅。

Ví dụ: I need to remember many things daily. For example, I keep track of homework deadlines to avoid missing them. Additionally, I remember dates for planned activities with friends to meet them on time.

Gợi ý: 回答中存在语法和表达不够自然的问题，且重复使用“this way”。建议简化句子结构，避免重复，并使用更准确的表达。

Ví dụ: I usually enter important tasks into my phone apps. They send me timely notifications, which help me remember and manage my tasks efficiently.

× Yes, I think that I'm quite good at memorizing certain things, especially the place the places that I've traveled or visited to before, for example, the landmarks of my trip.

✓ Yes, I think that I'm quite good at memorizing certain things, especially the places that I've traveled or visited before, for example, the landmarks of my trip.

这里“the place the places”重复且单复数不一致，应改为复数形式“the places”。此外，“visited to”中“to”是不必要的，动词“visit”后不加介词。

× especially the place the places that I've traveled or visited to before

✓ especially the places that I've traveled or visited before

动词“visit”后不需要加介词“to”，这是错误的介词使用。

× I forgot about the deadline of my homework assignment, which means that I didn't hand out the homework to the teacher on time, and this really made my final score really low.

✓ I forgot about the deadline of my homework assignment, which meant that I didn't hand in the homework to the teacher on time, and this really made my final score very low.

“which means”应与前文过去时态保持一致，改为“which meant”。“hand out”意思是分发，表达提交作业应使用“hand in”。“really low”中“really”重复，改为“very low”更合适。

× I forgot about the deadline of my homework assignment

✓ I forgot the deadline of my homework assignment

动词“forget”后直接接宾语时不需要介词“about”，使用“forgot the deadline”更准确。

× I have to keep track on the deadline of my homework assignments to avoid missing them.

✓ I have to keep track of the deadline of my homework assignments to avoid missing them.

短语“keep track”后应接介词“of”，而非“on”。

× I have to remember the date that I have planned or activities with my friends so that I can meet them on the exact day.

✓ I have to remember the dates of the plans or activities with my friends so that I can meet them on the exact day.

“the date that I have planned or activities”结构不清晰，应改为“the dates of the plans or activities”。

× I have to remember the date that I have planned or activities with my friends

✓ I have to remember the dates of the plans or activities with my friends

“date”与“activities”数量不一致，应统一为复数形式“dates”和“plans”。

× Actually, I usually enter the important things into the apps of my phone.

✓ Actually, I usually enter important things into the apps on my phone.

“apps of my phone”表达不自然，正确用法是“apps on my phone”。

× This way the phones will run well timely, send notification to me and remind me that I have some important things to finish.

✓ This way, the phone will run smoothly, send notifications to me, and remind me that I have some important things to finish.

“phones”应为单数“phone”，且“run well timely”表达不自然，改为“run smoothly”。“notification”应为复数“notifications”。

× send notification to me

✓ send notifications to me

“notification”应使用复数形式“notifications”，因为通常会有多条通知。