Part 1
Giám khảo
Are you good at memorising things?
Thí sinh
Yes, I'm good at memorizing and can remember something that others don't remember.
Giám khảo
Have you ever forgotten something important?
Thí sinh
Yes I have, when I was in primary school I forgot to do my homework once.
Giám khảo
What do you need to remember in your daily life?
Thí sinh
1st I need to remember what course I will take today, and I will remember the homework and I will remember to do something others like to pick up a package.
Giám khảo
How do you remember important things?
Thí sinh
Maybe I will take them down or let other people to notice me to do that thing.
Are you good at memorising things?
Điểm: 70.0Gợi ý: 回答较简短,缺乏具体细节和例子,表达不够自然。建议增加具体例子,使用更自然的表达方式。
Ví dụ: Yes, I consider myself good at memorizing. For example, I can easily remember people's names and important dates, which helps me in social situations.
Have you ever forgotten something important?
Điểm: 75.0Gợi ý: 回答直接但过于简短,缺少细节和连贯性。建议补充更多细节,如忘记的原因和感受。
Ví dụ: Yes, I have forgotten something important. Once in primary school, I forgot to do my homework because I was distracted by playing outside, and I felt quite embarrassed when the teacher asked for it.
What do you need to remember in your daily life?
Điểm: 60.0Gợi ý: 回答表达不够清晰,语法和逻辑有误,内容重复且缺乏连贯性。建议理清思路,使用连接词,表达更具体。
Ví dụ: In my daily life, I need to remember my class schedule, complete my homework on time, and sometimes I have to pick up packages for my family.
How do you remember important things?
Điểm: 65.0Gợi ý: 回答不够自然,语法错误,表达含糊。建议使用更准确的表达,说明具体方法并使用连接词。
Ví dụ: I usually write important things down in a notebook or set reminders on my phone. Also, I sometimes ask my friends to remind me if it's really important.
× Yes, I'm good at memorizing and can remember something that others don't remember.
✓ Yes, I'm good at memorizing and can remember things that others don't remember.
这里'something'用在可数名词前不合适,应该用复数形式'things',因为指的是多件事物。
× 1st I need to remember what course I will take today, and I will remember the homework and I will remember to do something others like to pick up a package.
✓ First, I need to remember what course I will take today, and I will remember the homework, and I will remember to do things like picking up a package that others like.
句子结构混乱,'do something others like to pick up a package'表达不清晰,改为'做别人喜欢的事情,比如取包裹'更符合英语表达习惯。
× Maybe I will take them down or let other people to notice me to do that thing.
✓ Maybe I will write them down or let other people remind me to do that thing.
'take them down'用法不当,正确表达是'write them down',且'let other people to notice me'中不应有'to',应改为'let other people remind me'更自然。