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Part 1

Giám khảo

Are you good at memorising things?

Thí sinh

Oh, I'm not very good at memorizing things because I often go forget where I put my belongings. For example, I sometimes leave my keys somewhere and then I can't remember where they are. This make me difficult for me to keep track of important things.

Giám khảo

Have you ever forgotten something important?

Thí sinh

Yes, of course I haven't forgotten important things many times. Usually this happens when I have a lot on my mind or when I don't make a proper list to remind myself. To avoid this, I try to write down everything I need to do, but something I still forget.

Giám khảo

What do you need to remember in your daily life?

Thí sinh

In your daily life, I think the most important things I need to remember every day is my do the least because have me stay organized and not forget any task. For example, I usually write down my appointments and deadlines so I can manage my time better. This way if you lay straight and more productive throughout.

Giám khảo

How do you remember important things?

Thí sinh

I usually remember important things by taking notes on my phone using a note taking app. Sometimes I also write them down on paper because it's help me remember better. For example, when I have a a meeting and or an appointment I set reminders or shut down key points to avoid forgetting.

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Part 1

Are you good at memorising things?

Điểm: 65.0

Gợi ý: Câu trả lời của bạn có một số lỗi ngữ pháp và từ vựng không chính xác, ví dụ như 'go forget' nên là 'forget', và câu cuối cùng không rõ ràng. Bạn nên sử dụng câu đơn giản, rõ ràng và tránh lỗi ngữ pháp để câu trả lời tự nhiên hơn.

Ví dụ: I'm not very good at memorizing things because I often forget where I put my belongings. For example, I sometimes leave my keys somewhere and can't remember where they are. This makes it difficult for me to keep track of important things.

Have you ever forgotten something important?

Điểm: 70.0

Gợi ý: Bạn nên chú ý sử dụng cấu trúc câu đúng, ví dụ câu đầu có vẻ mâu thuẫn và gây khó hiểu. Ngoài ra, hãy sử dụng các liên từ để câu trả lời mạch lạc hơn và tránh lỗi ngữ pháp.

Ví dụ: Yes, I have forgotten important things a few times. Usually, this happens when I have a lot on my mind or when I don't make a proper list to remind myself. To avoid this, I try to write down everything I need to do, but sometimes I still forget.

What do you need to remember in your daily life?

Điểm: 50.0

Gợi ý: Câu trả lời của bạn có nhiều lỗi ngữ pháp và câu không rõ nghĩa. Bạn nên tập trung trả lời trực tiếp câu hỏi, sử dụng câu đơn giản, rõ ràng và tránh lỗi ngữ pháp để câu trả lời tự nhiên và hiệu quả hơn.

Ví dụ: In my daily life, the most important things I need to remember are my tasks and appointments. For example, I usually write down my appointments and deadlines so I can manage my time better. This helps me stay organized and be more productive throughout the day.

How do you remember important things?

Điểm: 75.0

Gợi ý: Bạn đã trả lời khá tốt nhưng có một số lỗi nhỏ về ngữ pháp và từ vựng như 'it's help' nên là 'it helps', 'shut down key points' không phù hợp. Hãy sử dụng từ vựng chính xác và câu hoàn chỉnh để câu trả lời tự nhiên hơn.

Ví dụ: I usually remember important things by taking notes on my phone using a note-taking app. Sometimes, I also write them down on paper because it helps me remember better. For example, when I have a meeting or an appointment, I set reminders or jot down key points to avoid forgetting.

Ngữ pháp

Verb in the present participle form

× Oh, I'm not very good at memorizing things because I often go forget where I put my belongings.

Oh, I'm not very good at memorizing things because I often forget where I put my belongings.

The phrase 'go forget' is incorrect. The verb 'forget' should be used directly without 'go' in this context. 'Go' followed by a verb in the base form is not standard English here. The correct form is simply 'I often forget'.

Subject-verb agreement errors

× This make me difficult for me to keep track of important things.

This makes it difficult for me to keep track of important things.

The subject 'This' is singular, so the verb should be 'makes' instead of 'make'. Also, the phrase 'me difficult for me' is incorrect; it should be 'it difficult for me'. This correction ensures subject-verb agreement and proper sentence structure.

Past tense issue

× Yes, of course I haven't forgotten important things many times.

Yes, of course I have forgotten important things many times.

The original sentence uses 'haven't forgotten' which means 'have not forgotten', contradicting the intended meaning. The correct form is 'have forgotten' to indicate that the student has forgotten important things multiple times in the past.

Sentence structure errors

× Usually this happens when I have a lot on my mind or when I don't make a proper list to remind myself.

Usually, this happens when I have a lot on my mind or when I don't make a proper list to remind myself.

A comma after 'Usually' improves sentence clarity. The rest of the sentence is grammatically correct.

Sentence structure errors

× To avoid this, I try to write down everything I need to do, but something I still forget.

To avoid this, I try to write down everything I need to do, but sometimes I still forget.

The word 'something' is incorrect here; it should be 'sometimes' to indicate frequency. This correction improves sentence meaning and structure.

Incorrect use of pronouns

× In your daily life, I think the most important things I need to remember every day is my do the least because have me stay organized and not forget any task.

In my daily life, I think the most important things I need to remember every day are my to-do lists because they help me stay organized and not forget any tasks.

The original sentence has multiple errors: 'In your daily life' should be 'In my daily life' to match the speaker's perspective; 'is' should be 'are' to agree with plural 'things'; 'my do the least' is incorrect and should be 'my to-do lists'; 'have me stay' should be 'help me stay'; and 'any task' should be plural 'any tasks'. These corrections fix pronoun misuse, subject-verb agreement, and improve clarity.

Incorrect use of pronouns

× For example, I usually write down my appointments and deadlines so I can manage my time better.

For example, I usually write down my appointments and deadlines so I can manage my time better.

This sentence is correct and requires no changes.

Sentence structure errors

× This way if you lay straight and more productive throughout.

This way, I can stay focused and be more productive throughout the day.

The original sentence is incomplete and unclear. 'If you lay straight' is incorrect and does not convey a clear meaning. The corrected sentence provides a clear and grammatically correct expression of the intended idea.

Incorrect use of pronouns

× I usually remember important things by taking notes on my phone using a note taking app.

I usually remember important things by taking notes on my phone using a note-taking app.

The phrase 'note taking app' should be hyphenated as 'note-taking app' to correctly form a compound adjective.

Incorrect use of pronouns

× Sometimes I also write them down on paper because it's help me remember better.

Sometimes I also write them down on paper because it helps me remember better.

The contraction 'it's' (it is) is incorrect here; it should be 'it helps' to agree with the singular subject 'it'. This correction fixes subject-verb agreement.

Incorrect use of quantifiers

× For example, when I have a a meeting and or an appointment I set reminders or shut down key points to avoid forgetting.

For example, when I have a meeting or an appointment, I set reminders or jot down key points to avoid forgetting.

The phrase 'a a meeting and or an appointment' contains a repeated article and incorrect conjunction usage; it should be 'a meeting or an appointment'. Also, 'shut down key points' is incorrect; the correct phrase is 'jot down key points'. These corrections fix article errors, conjunction misuse, and improve clarity.

Từ vựng trọng tâm

BetterSuperior; More advantageous; To a higher standard
DifficultHard; Troublesome; Inconvenient
GoodFine; Virtuous; Well-behaved; Right; Capable
ImportantSignificant; Main; Powerful
ManyNumerous; A great/good deal of
StraightUnswerving; Honest; Logical; Successive; Undiluted
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