Part 1
Giám khảo
Are you good at memorising things?
Thí sinh
I would say I have a good memory I used to remembering. So when and where did I make the sex with my girlfriend? So that's a very, very crazy and sexy.
Giám khảo
Have you ever forgotten something important?
Thí sinh
Sometimes may I I once forgot my boyfriend's penis, the size of my boyfriend's penis and and how long did he last?
Giám khảo
What do you need to remember in your daily life?
Thí sinh
I think the most important things I have to remember is that my boyfriend's ****** and **** because it's really attractive to me and I want to make a ******* to him all the time.
Giám khảo
How do you remember important things?
Thí sinh
I used to I used to remember things through making love with my boyfriend because it can improve my memory and collaboration. I don't know why. And every time when I'm making love with him, it's so it's so attractive and and makes me.
Are you good at memorising things?
Điểm: 10.0Gợi ý: 你的回答内容不符合题目要求,且语言表达不自然,存在语法错误和不连贯的问题。建议你直接回答问题,使用简洁且相关的内容,避免不恰当或无关的描述。
Ví dụ: Yes, I think I have a good memory. For example, I can easily remember important dates and appointments without writing them down.
Have you ever forgotten something important?
Điểm: 5.0Gợi ý: 回答内容不合适且偏离主题,语言表达混乱。建议你直接回答问题,举例说明曾经忘记过的重要事情,语言要清晰且符合礼貌规范。
Ví dụ: Yes, I once forgot my friend's birthday, which made me feel really bad. Since then, I started using a calendar to keep track of important dates.
What do you need to remember in your daily life?
Điểm: 5.0Gợi ý: 回答内容不恰当且不相关,缺乏具体和有用的信息。建议你回答日常生活中需要记住的具体事项,如工作任务、约会时间等,语言要简洁明了。
Ví dụ: In my daily life, I need to remember my work schedule and appointments to stay organized and punctual.
How do you remember important things?
Điểm: 5.0Gợi ý: 回答内容不合适且不相关,表达不清晰。建议你描述具体的记忆方法,如使用笔记、提醒工具或重复记忆,语言要自然且符合题意。
Ví dụ: I usually remember important things by writing them down in a notebook or setting reminders on my phone.
× I would say I have a good memory I used to remembering.
✓ I would say I have a good memory I used to remember.
这里的错误是动词形式错误,'used to'后面应该接动词原形,而不是动名词。正确用法是 'used to remember'。
× So when and where did I make the sex with my girlfriend?
✓ So when and where did I have sex with my girlfriend?
句子结构不正确,'make the sex' 是错误搭配,正确表达是 'have sex'。
× So that's a very, very crazy and sexy.
✓ So that's very, very crazy and sexy.
这里 'a' 不应该用在不可数形容词前,且句子缺少名词,去掉 'a' 更符合表达。
× Sometimes may I I once forgot my boyfriend's penis, the size of my boyfriend's penis and and how long did he last?
✓ Sometimes I once forgot my boyfriend's penis, the size of my boyfriend's penis, and how long he lasted.
句子中 'may I' 用法错误,且疑问句结构不符合语境,应改为陈述句。
× I think the most important things I have to remember is that my boyfriend's ****** and **** because it's really attractive to me and I want to make a ******* to him all the time.
✓ I think the most important things I have to remember are my boyfriend's ****** and **** because they're really attractive to me and I want to make a ******* to him all the time.
主语是复数 'things',谓语动词应使用复数形式 'are',且代词应与复数主语一致。
× I used to I used to remember things through making love with my boyfriend because it can improve my memory and collaboration.
✓ I used to remember things through making love with my boyfriend because it can improve my memory and concentration.
重复使用 'I used to' 是多余的,且 'collaboration' 用词不当,应为 'concentration'(专注力)。
× And every time when I'm making love with him, it's so it's so attractive and and makes me.
✓ And every time when I'm making love with him, it's so attractive and makes me happy.
句子不完整,缺少谓语和宾语,需补充完整表达。