Part 1
Giám khảo
Are you good at memorising things?
Thí sinh
Yes, I am good at memorizing things because I can memorize everything. When the things I can put in anywhere at my homes, at my home and I just memorize it where it can put.
Giám khảo
Have you ever forgotten something important?
Thí sinh
Yes, I have ever forgotten my important exam reception at home and it was the time when I was an important exam and I forgot to forgotten my receipt and I was feel bad because.
Giám khảo
What do you need to remember in your daily life?
Thí sinh
Time management and stay organized are really important things to uh, make, make you remember in your daily life. Also maintain a healthy lifestyle and such as eating balanced meals and getting enough sleep is.
Giám khảo
How do you remember important things?
Thí sinh
I usually remember my important things by writing them down in a planner or using digital apps on my phone. This method helps me organize my tasks and set reminders so I don't forget deadlines or appointments. Additionally, I find that repeating information allowed or associated.
Are you good at memorising things?
Điểm: 50.0Gợi ý: Your answer is somewhat unclear and contains grammatical errors. Try to give a clear topic sentence directly answering the question, then add specific supporting details using linking words. Avoid redundancy and ensure your sentences are complete and natural.
Ví dụ: Yes, I am good at memorizing things because I use specific locations in my home to help me remember where I put items. For example, I always place my keys on a hook near the door, so I never lose them.
Have you ever forgotten something important?
Điểm: 40.0Gợi ý: Your answer is confusing and contains many grammatical mistakes. Try to clearly state the event you forgot, explain why it was important, and how you felt. Use linking words to connect your ideas logically.
Ví dụ: Yes, I once forgot my exam receipt at home on the day of an important test. Because of this, I was not allowed to enter the exam room, and I felt very disappointed and stressed.
What do you need to remember in your daily life?
Điểm: 55.0Gợi ý: Your answer has good ideas but lacks clarity and complete sentences. Use a clear topic sentence and support it with specific examples, linking your ideas smoothly. Avoid filler words and incomplete thoughts.
Ví dụ: In my daily life, I need to remember to manage my time well and stay organized. For instance, I plan my day in advance and make sure to eat balanced meals and get enough sleep to maintain a healthy lifestyle.
How do you remember important things?
Điểm: 75.0Gợi ý: Your answer is clear and well-structured but the last sentence is incomplete and unclear. Make sure to finish your thoughts and use linking words to connect ideas smoothly.
Ví dụ: I usually remember important things by writing them down in a planner or using digital apps on my phone. This helps me organize tasks and set reminders so I don't miss deadlines or appointments. Additionally, I find that repeating information aloud helps me remember it better.
× When the things I can put in anywhere at my homes, at my home and I just memorize it where it can put.
✓ When there are things I can put anywhere at my home, I just memorize where I put them.
The original sentence has incorrect verb forms and unclear structure. 'When the things I can put in anywhere at my homes' is ungrammatical and confusing. The correction uses 'When there are things' to introduce the clause properly, and 'I just memorize where I put them' uses correct verb forms and pronouns. Also, 'homes' is changed to singular 'home' for consistency.
× Yes, I have ever forgotten my important exam reception at home and it was the time when I was an important exam and I forgot to forgotten my receipt and I was feel bad because.
✓ Yes, I have forgotten my important exam receipt at home. It was during an important exam, and I forgot my receipt. I felt bad because of that.
The original sentence misuses 'have ever forgotten' which is incorrect; 'have forgotten' is correct for present perfect tense. 'Reception' is likely a mistake for 'receipt'. 'Forgot to forgotten' is incorrect; it should be 'forgot'. 'I was feel bad' is incorrect; it should be 'I felt bad'. The correction fixes these tense and word choice errors for clarity and grammatical correctness.
× Time management and stay organized are really important things to uh, make, make you remember in your daily life. Also maintain a healthy lifestyle and such as eating balanced meals and getting enough sleep is.
✓ Time management and staying organized are really important things to help you remember in your daily life. Also, maintaining a healthy lifestyle, such as eating balanced meals and getting enough sleep, is important.
The original sentence has awkward structure and incorrect verb forms. 'Stay organized' should be 'staying organized' to parallel 'time management'. The phrase 'make, make you remember' is unclear and corrected to 'help you remember'. The second sentence is incomplete and lacks a main verb; it is corrected to a complete sentence with proper gerunds and parallel structure.