Memory— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: 回答时语言不够流畅，有重复和语法错误，建议简化句子结构，避免重复，并注意时态和冠词的使用。

Ví dụ: Yes, I am good at memorising because I have practiced a lot, especially when I studied history and philosophy in high school. These subjects required me to remember many facts and ideas.

Gợi ý: 回答内容较简单，表达不够连贯，建议使用连接词使句子更流畅，并具体说明忘记的内容和影响。

Ví dụ: Yes, I once forgot an important line in a poem during a crucial Chinese exam, which caused me to lose five valuable points.

Gợi ý: 回答中有语法错误和重复，表达不够清晰，建议简化句子，避免重复，并用连接词组织内容。

Ví dụ: In my daily life, I need to remember many things, especially my routine tasks like what time to get up, the way to school, and the tasks I must complete before their deadlines.

Gợi ý: 回答中有重复和断句不连贯，建议使用连贯的句子表达方法，并具体说明记忆方法的步骤。

Ví dụ: I have my own methods to remember important things. First, I read them repeatedly to strengthen my impression. Then, I write them down on paper and stick the notes in places I often visit.

× I learned history philosophy when I'm in the high school.

✓ I learned history philosophy when I was in high school.

这里描述的是过去的经历，应该使用过去时态。'I'm'是现在时，应该改为过去时的'was'。

× It gave me a lot of it gave me a lot of opportunities to memorize things, yes.

✓ It gave me a lot of opportunities to memorize things, yes.

句子中重复了'it gave me a lot of'，应删除重复部分，使句子简洁通顺。

× Yes, I've forgotten something important.

✓ Yes, I forgot something important.

这里描述的是过去发生的具体事件，使用一般过去时更合适。

× It's a very important Chinese exam and I've forgotten the next sentence of a poem so that I lost a very important 5 scores.

✓ It was a very important Chinese exam, and I forgot the next sentence of a poem, so I lost 5 important points.

句子时态不一致，应统一为过去时；'so that'用法不当，改为' so'；'5 scores'应改为'5 points'更符合表达习惯。

× Are my routine tasks such as what time I should I should get up and the way I the way to the school or the tasks I need to finish it before the deadlines?

✓ My routine tasks are such as what time I should get up, the way to school, and the tasks I need to finish before the deadlines.

句子结构混乱，重复词语需删除；'Are'改为'My routine tasks are'；'the way I the way to the school'重复，应简化；'finish it'中的'it'多余，应删除。

× and stick the paper in the places that I will go into.

✓ and stick the paper in places that I will go to.

'go into'用法不当，应该用'go to'表示去某个地方。