Part 1
Giám khảo
Are you good at memorising things?
Thí sinh
Yes, I'm good at remember things. I often remember people's faces and names and important days.
Giám khảo
Have you ever forgotten something important?
Thí sinh
Yes, I've forgotten my best friend's birthday. It feels very bad because it we are very close. I apologize and promise to compensate him.
Giám khảo
What do you need to remember in your daily life?
Thí sinh
I need the remember my. I need to remember my work text, for example deadlines and meetings. I also need to check up my message and emails to. Make sure it.
Giám khảo
How do you remember important things?
Thí sinh
I usually use use my smart phones to remember important things. It's very useful. I set remember reminders and alarms to remind me.
Are you good at memorising things?
Điểm: 70.0Gợi ý: 你的回答中有语法错误,如"remember"应为"remembering",并且句子结构可以更自然流畅。建议使用更地道的表达方式,并避免重复。
Ví dụ: Yes, I'm quite good at memorising things. For instance, I can easily remember people's faces, names, and important dates.
Have you ever forgotten something important?
Điểm: 75.0Gợi ý: 回答中有语法错误和表达不够连贯,如"because it we are very close"应改为"because we are very close"。建议使用连接词使句子更连贯,并丰富细节。
Ví dụ: Yes, I once forgot my best friend's birthday, which made me feel really bad because we are very close. I apologized sincerely and promised to make it up to him.
What do you need to remember in your daily life?
Điểm: 50.0Gợi ý: 回答中有多处语法错误和不完整的句子,表达不清晰。建议练习完整句子结构,避免断句,并使用连接词使内容连贯。
Ví dụ: In my daily life, I need to remember important work tasks, such as deadlines and meetings. I also regularly check my messages and emails to stay updated.
How do you remember important things?
Điểm: 70.0Gợi ý: 回答中有重复词汇"use use",且表达较简单。建议避免重复,使用更丰富的词汇,并用连接词使句子更流畅。
Ví dụ: I usually use my smartphone to keep track of important things. It's very useful because I can set reminders and alarms to help me remember.
× Yes, I'm good at remember things.
✓ Yes, I'm good at remembering things.
动词短语“good at”后面应接动名词形式,不能用动词原形。这里应将“remember”改为“remembering”。
× It feels very bad because it we are very close.
✓ It feels very bad because we are very close.
句子中“it we”结构不正确,应该去掉多余的“it”,使句子结构正确。
× I apologize and promise to compensate him.
✓ I apologize and promise to make it up to him.
动词“compensate”后通常接被补偿的事物,而非人。这里应使用习惯表达“make it up to someone”表示弥补。
× I need the remember my.
✓ I need to remember my work.
句子中“the remember my”结构不完整且错误,应改为“to remember my work”使句意完整。
× I need to check up my message and emails to.
✓ I need to check my messages and emails too.
“check up”通常用于健康检查,检查信息时用“check”。“message”应复数“messages”,且“to”应为“too”表示“也”。
× Make sure it.
✓ Make sure of it.
短语“make sure”后应接介词“of”加宾语,表示确认某事。
× I usually use use my smart phones to remember important things.
✓ I usually use my smartphone to remember important things.
重复使用“use”是错误,且“smart phones”应为单数“smartphone”,更符合语境。
× I set remember reminders and alarms to remind me.
✓ I set reminders and alarms to remind me.
“set”后直接接名词“reminders”,不需要“remember”修饰。