Part 1
Giám khảo
Are you good at memorising things?
Thí sinh
No, to be honest, I'm not good at memorizing important things. I usually forget the places of my smartphones and keys. Even when I have already wear the glasses, I still seek for where is my glasses. So I have a bad memory totally.
Giám khảo
Have you ever forgotten something important?
Thí sinh
Yes, absolutely. I usually forget something important. For instance, I once booked a professional physical session but I forgot forget it, forgot it at all and I slipped until 10:00. Another day missed it at all.
Giám khảo
What do you need to remember in your daily life?
Thí sinh
In my daily life, I need to remember a lot of things. For instance, I'm a Spanish interpreter, so I need to remember the relevant words and the grammars. Some important things like I need to receive the guests.
Giám khảo
How do you remember important things?
Thí sinh
I heavily rely on technology to help me remember some important things. For instance, I usually set the alarms to wake me up and I take notes in the memory app and even the voice assistance to remind me every day.
Are you good at memorising things?
Điểm: 65.0Gợi ý: 回答中存在语法错误和表达不自然的问题,例如“seek for where is my glasses”应改为“look for my glasses”。建议简化句子结构,避免重复表达,并注意时态和介词的正确使用。
Ví dụ: No, I'm not very good at memorizing things. For example, I often forget where I put my smartphone or keys. Even when I am wearing my glasses, I sometimes have to look for them again. So, I think my memory is quite poor.
Have you ever forgotten something important?
Điểm: 55.0Gợi ý: 回答中有语法错误和表达混乱,如“forgot forget it, forgot it at all”不符合英语表达习惯。建议使用清晰简洁的句子,避免重复,并具体说明忘记的重要事情。
Ví dụ: Yes, I have forgotten important things before. For example, I once booked a professional physical therapy session but completely forgot about it and arrived late at 10:00. On another occasion, I missed the appointment entirely.
What do you need to remember in your daily life?
Điểm: 70.0Gợi ý: 回答内容较为简单,语法和表达有待改进。建议使用更自然的表达方式,注意名词复数和冠词的使用,并丰富细节使回答更具体。
Ví dụ: In my daily life, I have to remember many things. Since I work as a Spanish interpreter, I need to remember relevant vocabulary and grammar rules. Besides that, I also have to remember to receive guests on time.
How do you remember important things?
Điểm: 75.0Gợi ý: 回答较为完整,但表达略显重复。建议使用更自然的连接词,避免重复“remember”,并丰富细节使表达更流畅。
Ví dụ: I rely heavily on technology to help me remember important things. For example, I set alarms to wake me up, take notes in a memory app, and use voice assistants to remind me of daily tasks.
× Even when I have already wear the glasses, I still seek for where is my glasses.
✓ Even when I am already wearing the glasses, I still look for where my glasses are.
这里的动词时态错误,'have already wear' 应该用现在进行时 'am already wearing',因为描述的是正在进行的动作。'seek for' 用法不正确,应该用 'look for'。此外,'where is my glasses' 语序错误,正确语序是 'where my glasses are'。
× I still seek for where is my glasses.
✓ I still look for where my glasses are.
动词 'seek' 后面不需要介词 'for',正确搭配是 'look for'。
× Even when I have already wear the glasses, I still seek for where is my glasses.
✓ Even when I am already wearing the glasses, I still look for where my glasses are.
'glasses' 是复数形式,句中应保持一致,且语序应调整为 'where my glasses are'。
× I once booked a professional physical session but I forgot forget it, forgot it at all and I slipped until 10:00.
✓ I once booked a professional physical session but I forgot it completely and I showed up late until 10:00.
'forgot forget it' 是重复错误,应为 'forgot it'。'slipped until 10:00' 用词不当,应该用 'showed up late until 10:00' 表示迟到。
× Another day missed it at all.
✓ Another day, I missed it completely.
句子缺少主语,应补充 'I',并且 'missed it at all' 用法不当,改为 'missed it completely' 更合适。
× I need to remember the relevant words and the grammars.
✓ I need to remember the relevant words and the grammar.
'grammar' 是不可数名词,不应加复数形式 'grammars'。
× Some important things like I need to receive the guests.
✓ Some important things, like needing to receive guests.
句子结构不完整,'like I need to receive the guests' 应改为 'like needing to receive guests',且 'the guests' 中 'the' 可省略。
× I heavily rely on technology to help me remember some important things.
✓ I heavily rely on technology to help me remember some important things.
此句无明显代词错误,保持原句。
× I take notes in the memory app and even the voice assistance to remind me every day.
✓ I take notes in the memory app and even use the voice assistant to remind me every day.
'voice assistance' 应为 'voice assistant',且缺少动词 'use',使句子完整。