Part 1
Giám khảo
Are you good at memorising things?
Thí sinh
Well, I think yes. I usually use tools such as setting reminders in my or taking notes on my refrigerators to remind me the things that I have to finish.
Giám khảo
Have you ever forgotten something important?
Thí sinh
No, I didn't. As I mentioned before, I will use a lot of measures to help me remember the significant things. So I I would never, I would never let it happen.
Giám khảo
What do you need to remember in your daily life?
Thí sinh
Firstly, I need to remember the urgent tasks that I need to finish right now and then I will record my daily study task.
Giám khảo
How do you remember important things?
Thí sinh
Besides the method we mentioned before, I will also talk to the things to my parents and ask them to remind me if I forget.
Are you good at memorising things?
Điểm: 70.0Gợi ý: 回答中存在语法错误和表达不自然的问题,例如“setting reminders in my or taking notes on my refrigerators”不完整且不准确。建议使用更准确的表达方式,并注意句子完整性和流畅性。
Ví dụ: Yes, I am quite good at memorising things. I usually set reminders on my phone or write notes on the refrigerator to help me remember tasks I need to complete.
Have you ever forgotten something important?
Điểm: 65.0Gợi ý: 回答中有重复和语法错误,如“No, I didn't”应为“No, I haven't”。建议避免重复,使用更自然的表达,并且注意时态的正确使用。
Ví dụ: No, I haven't forgotten anything important because I always use various methods to help me remember important tasks.
What do you need to remember in your daily life?
Điểm: 75.0Gợi ý: 回答内容较为简单,缺少连贯的连接词,且表达略显生硬。建议使用连接词使句子更流畅,并提供更具体的细节。
Ví dụ: Firstly, I need to remember urgent tasks that require immediate attention. Besides that, I also keep track of my daily study tasks by recording them in a planner.
How do you remember important things?
Điểm: 60.0Gợi ý: 回答中存在语法错误和表达不清晰的问题,如“talk to the things to my parents”不合逻辑。建议使用更准确的表达,并且句子结构要清晰。
Ví dụ: In addition to using reminders, I also tell my parents about important things and ask them to remind me if I happen to forget.
× I usually use tools such as setting reminders in my or taking notes on my refrigerators to remind me the things that I have to finish.
✓ I usually use tools such as setting reminders on my phone or taking notes on my refrigerator to remind me of the things that I have to finish.
介词使用错误。应使用 'on my phone' 而不是 'in my',以及 'on my refrigerator' 而不是 'on my refrigerators'。此外,'remind me the things' 应为 'remind me of the things',因为动词 'remind' 后面通常接介词 'of'。建议多注意常用介词搭配。
× No, I didn't.
✓ No, I haven't.
时态错误。问题是关于过去是否忘记过重要的事情,使用现在完成时 'haven't' 更合适,表示到目前为止没有忘记过。'didn't' 一般用于具体过去时间点。
× So I I would never, I would never let it happen.
✓ So I will never let it happen.
情态动词使用错误。这里表达的是对未来的确定承诺,应该用 'will' 而不是 'would'。'would' 通常用于假设或委婉表达。
× Firstly, I need to remember the urgent tasks that I need to finish right now and then I will record my daily study task.
✓ Firstly, I need to remember the urgent tasks that I need to finish right now and then I will record my daily study tasks.
单复数错误。'daily study task' 应为复数形式 'daily study tasks',因为通常每天有多个学习任务。
× Besides the method we mentioned before, I will also talk to the things to my parents and ask them to remind me if I forget.
✓ Besides the methods we mentioned before, I will also talk to my parents about the things and ask them to remind me if I forget.
介词和表达顺序错误。'talk to the things to my parents' 结构不正确,应改为 'talk to my parents about the things'。此外,'method' 应为复数 'methods',因为前文提到多种方法。