Part 1
Giám khảo
Are you good at memorising things?
Thí sinh
I'm not really good at memorizing things, especially to remember people's names and faces. For example, I always forget people's name and what they look like after once we have met, so it's quite embarrassing.
Giám khảo
Have you ever forgotten something important?
Thí sinh
Yes, once I forgot my best friend's birthday and I feel terrible about it because we have known each other for 10 years already and she remembers my birthday in each year and buying me birthday gifts so I feel very bad about it.
Giám khảo
What do you need to remember in your daily life?
Thí sinh
In my daily life I have to remember to feed my kitten every day. Sometimes I forget it or I owe it or I overslept and she will mailing the whole day and annoy me every time.
Giám khảo
How do you remember important things?
Thí sinh
A really good way for me to remember important things is to write on my agenda in my phone the day before I doing this thing like the night before, so I will remember it pretty.
Are you good at memorising things?
Điểm: 75.0Gợi ý: 回答中存在语法错误和表达不够自然的问题,例如“people's name”应为“people's names”,以及“after once we have met”表达不准确。建议注意单复数一致和时态使用,避免重复表达。
Ví dụ: I'm not very good at memorizing things, especially people's names and faces. For instance, I often forget their names and appearances shortly after meeting them, which can be quite embarrassing.
Have you ever forgotten something important?
Điểm: 70.0Gợi ý: 回答中时态混用和句子结构不够清晰,如“she remembers my birthday in each year and buying me birthday gifts”表达不连贯。建议使用正确的时态和连接词,使句子更流畅。
Ví dụ: Yes, once I forgot my best friend's birthday, and I felt terrible because we have known each other for 10 years. She always remembers my birthday and buys me gifts every year, so I felt very bad about forgetting hers.
What do you need to remember in your daily life?
Điểm: 60.0Gợi ý: 回答中存在语法错误和用词不当,如“owe it”和“she will mailing the whole day”表达不正确。建议学习正确的表达方式,并注意句子完整性和逻辑性。
Ví dụ: In my daily life, I need to remember to feed my kitten every day. Sometimes I forget or oversleep, and then she meows all day, which annoys me.
How do you remember important things?
Điểm: 65.0Gợi ý: 回答中存在语法错误,如“the day before I doing this thing”和“remember it pretty”表达不准确。建议使用正确的动词形式和更自然的表达。
Ví dụ: A good way for me to remember important things is to write them in my phone's agenda the night before, so I can remember them easily.
× I always forget people's name and what they look like after once we have met, so it's quite embarrassing.
✓ I always forget people's names and what they look like after we have met once, so it's quite embarrassing.
这里“people's name”应为复数形式“people's names”,因为“people”表示多个人,名字也应为复数。
× Yes, once I forgot my best friend's birthday and I feel terrible about it because we have known each other for 10 years already and she remembers my birthday in each year and buying me birthday gifts so I feel very bad about it.
✓ Yes, once I forgot my best friend's birthday and I felt terrible about it because we had known each other for 10 years already and she remembered my birthday each year and bought me birthday gifts, so I felt very bad about it.
这里描述过去的事件,动词时态应统一为过去时,如“feel”改为“felt”,“have known”改为过去完成时“had known”,“remembers”改为“remembered”,“buying”改为“bought”。
× Sometimes I forget it or I owe it or I overslept and she will mailing the whole day and annoy me every time.
✓ Sometimes I forget it or I owe it or I oversleep, and she will be meowing the whole day and annoying me every time.
“overslept”是过去式,与句中其他动词时态不符,应改为现在时“oversleep”。“mailing”应为“meowing”,表示猫叫声。
× A really good way for me to remember important things is to write on my agenda in my phone the day before I doing this thing like the night before, so I will remember it pretty.
✓ A really good way for me to remember important things is to write on my agenda in my phone the day before I do this thing, like the night before, so I will remember it well.
“I doing”应改为“I do”,因为“do”是动词原形,符合句子结构。副词“pretty”用法不当,应改为“well”表示“好地”。