Memory— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: 你的回答有些矛盾，开头说自己记忆力好，但后面又说不擅长记忆，建议回答时保持观点一致。同时，回答中有语法错误和表达不自然的地方，如“when I have already in the bus stations”应更正。建议简洁明了地表达观点，并用具体例子支持。

Ví dụ: Actually, I'm not very good at memorising things. For example, I often forget to bring my ID card to school or buy tickets before getting on the bus, which causes me trouble.

Gợi ý: 回答表达较为清晰，但语句不够连贯，有重复和停顿。建议使用连词使句子更流畅，如“because”后面应完整表达原因。同时，避免重复表达“I did”。

Ví dụ: Yes, I once forgot my mother's birthday last year because I was at boarding school and didn't call her to say happy birthday, which made me feel very sorry.

Gợi ý: 回答内容具体，但有重复“ I need, I need”，语法和表达稍显混乱。建议简化句子结构，使用恰当的连接词，使表达更自然流畅。

Ví dụ: I need to remember to exercise every day because I'm currently on a diet to stay fit. For example, I often run on the treadmill as part of my aerobic workout.

Gợi ý: 回答中存在语法错误和表达不自然，如“write the important things done in the memorandum”应改为“write important things in the memo app”。建议使用连贯的句子，避免重复词汇，表达更清晰。

Ví dụ: Recently, I found an efficient way to remember important things is to write them down in the memo app on my mobile phone because I always have my phone with me, and it reminds me of tasks I haven't completed.

× I always forget to take my ID cards to schools or just forget to buy tickets when I have already in the bus stations.

✓ I always forget to take my ID card to school or just forget to buy tickets when I am already at the bus station.

这里“ID cards”应为单数“ID card”，因为通常人们只带一张身份证。"schools"应为单数“school”，表示去学校。"have already in the bus stations"结构不正确，应改为“am already at the bus station”，表示“我已经在公交车站”。

× That's really a bad idea. But.

✓ That's really a bad idea, though.

句子以“but”结尾不完整，缺少后续内容。应改为“though”或补充完整句子，使表达连贯。

× I felt really sorry that I forgot my mother's birthday last year.

✓ I felt really sorry that I forgot my mother's birthday last year.

此句时态正确，无需修改。

× I, you know, because I am in the boarding schools.

✓ I, you know, was in boarding school.

句子结构不完整，缺少谓语动词。应改为“I was in boarding school”，表达过去的状态。

× I did. I didn't give her a phone call to express happy birthday to her.

✓ I didn't. I didn't give her a phone call to wish her a happy birthday.

“I did”单独使用不明确，应改为“I didn't”。“express happy birthday”表达不自然，应改为“wish her a happy birthday”。

× I need to remember to do exercise in my daily life because these days I'm just on my diet to keep fit and it's really important to do some aerobics sports like running on the treadmill.

✓ I need to remember to do exercise in my daily life because these days I'm just on a diet to keep fit and it's really important to do some aerobic sports like running on the treadmill.

“on my diet”应为“on a diet”，表示节食。“aerobics sports”应为“aerobic sports”，形容词形式。

× Recently I found a really efficient way to remember important things is that write the important things done in the memorandum in my mobile phone.

✓ Recently I found a really efficient way to remember important things: writing the important things down in the memo on my mobile phone.

句子结构不完整，缺少主语和谓语搭配。应使用动名词“writing”作为主语补语。"memorandum"更常用“memo”。

× Because it stays mobile phone is always by our side and it can remind us the things we hadn't hadn't done.

✓ Because the mobile phone is always by our side and it can remind us of the things we haven't done.

“it stays mobile phone”结构错误，应为“the mobile phone is”。“remind us the things”应为“remind us of the things”。“hadn't hadn't”重复，应为“haven't”。