MemoryPart 1 Báo cáo

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Part 1

Giám khảo

Are you good at memorising things?

Thí sinh

Yes, I believe I'm good at memorizing things. For instance, when I was preparing for the post graduation entrance exam, I managed to memorize about more than 20 textbooks. Therefore, I think I have very strong memory skills.

Giám khảo

Have you ever forgotten something important?

Thí sinh

Yes, I had ever forgotten to submit the homework for one of our major courses. I was too busy at other assignments during that period. But fortunately, the teacher allowed me to submit it next week.

Giám khảo

What do you need to remember in your daily life?

Thí sinh

I'm still a student, so I often have to remember some daily study tasks. For instance, everyday courses to take homework to finish and some materials or academic papers to submit. I think those things are mainly related to.

Giám khảo

How do you remember important things?

Thí sinh

I often write them down in paper or making electronic lists using my mobile phone. Those ways helps me stay organized and reminds me of important schedules and tasks.

Đánh giá

Tổng

Tổng: 6.0Trôi chảy và mạch lạc: 6.0Phát âm: 6.0Ngữ pháp: 5.5Từ vựng: 6.0

Part 1

Are you good at memorising things?

Điểm: 85.0

Gợi ý: 回答较为自然且内容具体,但句子结构稍显重复,且“about more than 20 textbooks”表达不够准确,建议使用更简洁且准确的表达方式。

Ví dụ: Yes, I consider myself good at memorizing. For example, while preparing for my postgraduate entrance exam, I memorized over 20 textbooks, which shows my strong memory skills.

Have you ever forgotten something important?

Điểm: 80.0

Gợi ý: 回答内容具体,但语法上有错误,如“had ever forgotten”应为“have forgotten”,且句子连接稍显生硬,建议使用更自然的时态和连接词。

Ví dụ: Yes, I have forgotten to submit homework for an important course because I was busy with other assignments. Fortunately, the teacher allowed me to submit it the following week.

What do you need to remember in your daily life?

Điểm: 65.0

Gợi ý: 回答不够完整,最后一句话未表达完整意思,且部分表达不够自然,建议补充完整句子并使用更流畅的表达。

Ví dụ: As a student, I need to remember daily study tasks, such as attending classes, completing homework, and submitting academic papers. These responsibilities are essential for my academic progress.

How do you remember important things?

Điểm: 75.0

Gợi ý: 回答表达基本清晰,但存在语法错误,如“making”应为“make”,“helps”应为“help”,建议注意主谓一致和动词形式。

Ví dụ: I usually write important things down on paper or make electronic lists on my phone. These methods help me stay organized and remind me of important schedules and tasks.

Ngữ pháp

Singular and plural issue

× I managed to memorize about more than 20 textbooks.

I managed to memorize more than 20 textbooks.

“about more than”表达重复,应该只用“more than”表示“超过”。这是数量词使用错误,需简化表达。

Past tense issue

× I had ever forgotten to submit the homework for one of our major courses.

I once forgot to submit the homework for one of our major courses.

“had ever forgotten”时态和用法错误,应该用一般过去时“forgot”表示过去发生的动作,“ever”用法不当,改为“once”更合适。

Incorrect use of prepositions

× I was too busy at other assignments during that period.

I was too busy with other assignments during that period.

动词busy后应接介词with而非at,表示忙于某事。

Present tense issue

× For instance, everyday courses to take homework to finish and some materials or academic papers to submit.

For instance, everyday courses, homework to finish, and some materials or academic papers to submit.

原句缺少谓语,且表达不完整,需补充逗号分隔并调整结构,使句子完整通顺。

Incorrect use of prepositions

× I often write them down in paper or making electronic lists using my mobile phone.

I often write them down on paper or make electronic lists using my mobile phone.

“write down”后应接介词“on”而非“in”,且“making”应改为动词原形“make”与前半句保持并列结构。

Singular and plural issue

× Those ways helps me stay organized and reminds me of important schedules and tasks.

Those ways help me stay organized and remind me of important schedules and tasks.

主语“ways”为复数,谓语动词应使用复数形式“help”和“remind”,保持主谓一致。

Từ vựng trọng tâm

BusyOccupied; Unavailable; Hectic
GoodFine; Virtuous; Well-behaved; Right; Capable
ImportantSignificant; Main; Powerful
StrongPowerful; Forceful; Secure; Durable; Forceful
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