Memory— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: Your answer is somewhat unclear and contains grammatical errors, such as "posted my memory." Try to use clearer expressions and provide more specific details about how you improved your memory. Also, avoid ending abruptly; add a concluding sentence to make your answer complete.

Ví dụ: Yes, I am quite good at memorizing things because I have practiced various techniques and even attended special courses to improve my memory skills. For example, I learned methods like visualization and repetition, which help me remember information more effectively.

Gợi ý: Your answer has some grammatical mistakes and unclear parts, such as "my mom liked church and I was." Try to clarify your ideas and use past tense consistently. Also, provide more specific details about the situation and your feelings to make your answer more engaging.

Ví dụ: Yes, about three years ago, I forgot my mother's birthday. I had to quickly buy a gift, which wasn't very thoughtful, but luckily, she appreciated it because it was related to her love for church. I felt quite embarrassed but learned to be more organized.

Gợi ý: Your answer is generally clear but contains a repeated word "starting starting." Try to avoid repetition and expand your answer by explaining why you use a notebook and how it helps you. Use linking words to improve coherence.

Ví dụ: In my daily life, I need to remember many things, ranging from my personal plans to exam topics. Therefore, I keep a small notebook where I write down all my tasks and important information, which helps me stay organized and reduces stress.

Gợi ý: Your answer is clear but starts awkwardly with "So remember important things." Try to begin with a direct topic sentence. Also, use linking words like "for example" or "in addition" to connect your ideas smoothly.

Ví dụ: To remember important things, I usually use the notebook app on my phone where I write down all my tasks and cross them out once completed. In addition, I like to place sticky notes around my house as reminders, which helps me stay on track.

× About 3 years ago I have forgotten about my mother's birthday and I had to improvise and buy a present in a rush.

✓ About 3 years ago I forgot about my mother's birthday and I had to improvise and buy a present in a rush.

The phrase 'About 3 years ago' indicates a specific time in the past, so the simple past tense 'forgot' should be used instead of the present perfect 'have forgotten'. The present perfect is used for actions without a specific time or that have relevance to the present, which is not the case here.

× It wasn't a very well thought present, but my mom liked church and I was.

✓ It wasn't a very well thought-out present, but my mom liked it and so did I.

The original sentence is unclear and incomplete. 'Well thought' should be 'well thought-out' as a compound adjective. The phrase 'my mom liked church and I was' is incorrect and confusing; it should be 'my mom liked it and so did I' to express that both liked the present.

× So remember important things.

✓ To remember important things,

The sentence 'So remember important things.' is incomplete and lacks clarity. It seems to be an introductory phrase leading to an explanation. Changing it to 'To remember important things,' makes it a proper introductory phrase for the following explanation.

× I usually use the notebook app on my phone and I write down all the things I need to do and cross them out as I finish them.

✓ I usually use the notebook app on my phone, where I write down all the things I need to do and cross them out as I finish them.

The original sentence is understandable but slightly awkward. Adding 'where' clarifies that the app is the place where the writing and crossing out happen, improving sentence flow and clarity.