Part 1
Giám khảo
Are you good at memorising things?
Thí sinh
No, I can't say I have a good memories because I often forget something important. Such as I always forgot where my phones and my keys places. And I am struggling with, remember the name and face?
Giám khảo
Have you ever forgotten something important?
Thí sinh
Definitely, yes. I forgot something important. For example, I forgot an important exam for me, but. Fortunately, my homemate is remind me and I get to the exam.
Giám khảo
What do you need to remember in your daily life?
Thí sinh
There are a lot of things. Need I to remember such as the knowledge from I learn from the classes or the plan, what I? Need to do?
Giám khảo
How do you remember important things?
Thí sinh
For some important things, I would. Make some notes and alarms to remind me. And I always tell my. Friends and led him to recall me if I forgot.
Are you good at memorising things?
Điểm: 55.0Gợi ý: 你的回答中存在语法错误和表达不自然的问题,例如“good memories”应为“good memory”,“forgot”应为“forget”,句子结构不完整。建议你在回答时注意时态一致,句子完整,并且避免重复表达。可以尝试用简单清晰的句子表达自己的观点。
Ví dụ: No, I am not very good at memorising things because I often forget important items like my phone and keys. I also find it difficult to remember people's names and faces.
Have you ever forgotten something important?
Điểm: 50.0Gợi ý: 回答中存在语法错误和表达不连贯的问题,如“homemate is remind me”应为“housemate reminded me”。建议你在回答时注意时态和主谓一致,句子要连贯完整。同时,避免重复表达“forgot something important”。
Ví dụ: Yes, I have forgotten something important before. For example, I once forgot about an important exam, but fortunately, my housemate reminded me and I was able to attend it.
What do you need to remember in your daily life?
Điểm: 40.0Gợi ý: 你的回答语法混乱,句子不完整,表达不清晰。建议你练习用完整的句子回答问题,注意语序和时态,避免使用不正确的结构。可以先给出主题句,然后用具体细节支持。
Ví dụ: I need to remember many things in my daily life, such as the knowledge I learn from my classes and the plans I have to complete each day.
How do you remember important things?
Điểm: 45.0Gợi ý: 回答中存在语法错误和表达不连贯的问题,如“led him to recall me”应为“ask them to remind me”。建议你使用连贯的句子,注意时态和主谓一致,避免断句过短。
Ví dụ: To remember important things, I usually make notes and set alarms. I also tell my friends and ask them to remind me if I forget something.
× No, I can't say I have a good memories because I often forget something important.
✓ No, I can't say I have good memories because I often forget something important.
“memories”前面不需要加不定冠词“a”,因为“memories”是复数名词,不能用“a”修饰。应去掉“a”。
× Such as I always forgot where my phones and my keys places.
✓ For example, I always forget where my phone and my keys are placed.
“forgot”是过去式,但句子表达的是经常发生的事情,应使用一般现在时“forget”。“phones”应为单数“phone”,因为通常指一个手机。动词“places”用法错误,应改为“are placed”表示位置。
× And I am struggling with, remember the name and face?
✓ And I am struggling with remembering names and faces.
“struggling with”后应接动名词形式,不能直接接动词原形“remember”。“name and face”应使用复数形式“names and faces”,因为通常是多个名字和面孔。
× Definitely, yes. I forgot something important.
✓ Definitely, yes. I have forgotten something important.
这里表达的是过去发生且对现在有影响的事情,应该用现在完成时“have forgotten”,而不是简单过去时“forgot”。
× Fortunately, my homemate is remind me and I get to the exam.
✓ Fortunately, my homemate reminded me and I got to the exam.
“is remind me”结构错误,应使用过去式“reminded”。“get to the exam”应使用过去式“got”,与前文时态一致。
× There are a lot of things. Need I to remember such as the knowledge from I learn from the classes or the plan, what I? Need to do?
✓ There are a lot of things I need to remember, such as the knowledge I learn from classes or the plans I need to do.
句子结构混乱,应将“Need I to remember”改为“I need to remember”,去掉多余的“to”。“from I learn”应改为“I learn”。“plan, what I? Need to do?”应改为“plans I need to do”。
× For some important things, I would. Make some notes and alarms to remind me.
✓ For some important things, I would make some notes and set alarms to remind me.
“would”后不应断句,且“make some notes and alarms”表达不完整,应加“set alarms”表示设置闹钟。
× And I always tell my. Friends and led him to recall me if I forgot.
✓ And I always tell my friends and ask them to remind me if I forget.
“my. Friends”中间不应有句号,应为“my friends”。“led him to recall me”表达错误,应为“ask them to remind me”。“if I forgot”应为一般现在时“if I forget”,表示条件句。