Memory— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: Try to make your answer more coherent and natural by avoiding incomplete sentences and redundancy. Use linking words to connect ideas and provide a clear topic sentence followed by supporting details. Also, correct minor grammatical errors such as 'good in memorizing' to 'good at memorising'.

Ví dụ: Yes, I am quite good at memorising certain things. For instance, my father often asks me to recall his Lowe's phone number, which I can remember easily. This ability makes me feel proud, although I find it harder to memorise other types of information.

Gợi ý: Focus on clarity and coherence by using correct vocabulary and sentence structure. Avoid repetition and unclear phrases like 'taken my cousin into the soul'. Use linking words to connect ideas logically and provide specific details about the incident.

Ví dụ: Yes, I once forgot something important when I was in high school. I took my cousin to school but then forgot about him there. When I got home, I was scolded for being careless. This incident remains a strong memory reminding me to be more responsible.

Gợi ý: Make your answer complete and clear by finishing your sentences and using correct vocabulary. Use linking words to list the things you need to remember and be specific about them. For example, clarify what 'take my house' means and correct 'ACS' to 'AC' and 'four shield' to 'four shield' or clarify the intended word.

Ví dụ: In my daily life, I need to remember to check my house before leaving. For example, I always make sure the stove is turned off, the air conditioner and television are switched off, and all doors are locked. These checks help me feel secure throughout the day.

Gợi ý: Improve clarity by using correct vocabulary such as 'list' instead of 'lease'. Use linking words to connect your methods logically and avoid redundancy. Also, try to be concise and avoid repeating similar ideas.

Ví dụ: I remember important things by making a priority list and setting reminders on my phone. This way, I receive constant notifications to complete my tasks. Additionally, I review my list at the end of the day to ensure I have accomplished everything and stayed updated.

× I would personally say that I am good in memorizing some things like.

✓ I would personally say that I am good at memorizing some things.

The correct preposition to use with 'good' when referring to a skill is 'at', not 'in'. Hence, 'good at memorizing' is correct.

× There was a time my father even calls me to recall his Lowe's phone number.

✓ There was a time my father even called me to recall his Lowe's phone number.

The sentence refers to a past event, so the verb should be in the past tense 'called' instead of present tense 'calls'.

× Yes, There was an incident when I was a bit younger in my high school.

✓ Yes, there was an incident when I was a bit younger in my high school.

The word 'there' should not be capitalized after a comma; it should be lowercase.

× I had taken my cousin into the soul and I actually forgot about the soul.

✓ I had taken my cousin into the school and I actually forgot about the school.

The word 'soul' is incorrect in this context; the intended word is 'school'.

× And I went back home and I got a nice scolding and it was reprimanded for being very tedious.

✓ And I went back home and I got a nice scolding and I was reprimanded for being very careless.

The pronoun 'it' is incorrect here; the subject 'I' should be used. Also, 'tedious' is not appropriate; 'careless' fits better in this context.

× As an adult, something that I should always be remembering is to take my house before I leave home.

✓ As an adult, something that I should always remember is to lock my house before I leave home.

The phrase 'take my house' is incorrect; the intended meaning is likely 'lock my house'. Also, 'remembering' should be 'remember' to fit the sentence structure.

× I would go to the kitchen to take if I have put on the stove, if I have switched off the switches like the ACS or the televisions or if I have left the four shield.

✓ I would go to the kitchen to check if I have turned on the stove, if I have switched off the switches like the AC or the television, or if I have left the door unlocked.

The phrase 'take if I have put on the stove' is incorrect; 'check if I have turned on the stove' is correct. 'ACS' should be 'AC', 'televisions' should be singular 'television' for general reference, and 'four shield' is unclear and likely meant to be 'door unlocked' or similar.

× So those are some things that I.

✓ So those are some things that I remember to do.

The sentence is incomplete and needs a verb phrase to complete the thought.

× The best way for me to remember important things is to make a lease and to make a priority lease.

✓ The best way for me to remember important things is to make a list and to make a priority list.

The word 'lease' is incorrect; the intended word is 'list'.

× Or a reminder in my phone where I get a constant reminder to make sure I have done what I'm supposed to do for the day.

✓ Or a reminder on my phone where I get a constant notification to make sure I have done what I'm supposed to do for the day.

The preposition 'in' should be 'on' when referring to something on a device. Also, 'reminder' repeated is redundant; 'notification' is better for clarity.

× And just to make sure I'm updated with my daily choice.

✓ And just to make sure I'm updated with my daily chores.

The word 'choice' is incorrect in this context; 'chores' or 'tasks' fits better to indicate daily responsibilities.