Memory— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: 回答中存在语法错误和表达不清的问题，建议简化句子结构，避免冗余，并使用更准确的词汇表达记忆力差的情况。

Ví dụ: No, I'm not good at memorising things. I often forget where I put my keys or important cards. Recently, I've been trying some methods to improve my memory, but they haven't worked yet.

Gợi ý: 回答中时态和语法使用不准确，建议使用正确的时态和更连贯的句子结构，同时补充细节使内容更具体。

Ví dụ: Yes, I have forgotten important things before. For instance, last semester at university, I forgot the date of one of my final exams. Fortunately, my teacher was very kind and allowed me to retake it.

Gợi ý: 回答中表达重复且不够流畅，建议使用更自然的表达方式，避免重复，并提供具体例子。

Ví dụ: I need to remember many things every day, like the places I have to visit and where I put my belongings, such as my keys and car.

Gợi ý: 回答较为简洁，但表达不够自然，建议使用更地道的表达方式，并适当扩展细节使回答更丰富。

Ví dụ: I usually use apps like Memo and Reminders to help me remember important tasks. They send me notifications throughout the day so I don't forget anything important.

× I really have bad memory

✓ I really have a bad memory

这里的memory是可数名词，表示记忆力时需要加冠词a，表示“一种记忆力”。

× I often forget the places where I placed my kids and edit cards.

✓ I often forget the places where I placed my keys and edit cards.

这里的'kids'应为'keys'，可能是拼写错误，且placed是过去式，符合语境。

× But I'm trying to protect medication to improve my ability of my horizon but I think it doesn't work now.

✓ But I'm trying to practice meditation to improve my horizon, but I think it doesn't work now.

原句中'protect medication'应为'practice meditation'，意思是练习冥想。'ability of my horizon'表达不当，改为'improve my horizon'更自然。

× Sure I've ever forgot something such as my date of exam.

✓ Sure I've ever forgotten something such as the date of my exam.

'forgot'应使用过去分词'forgotten'与现在完成时连用。'my date of exam'应为'the date of my exam'。

× For example, last term of my university I forgot the date of one of my final exam, but the teacher was so friendly he gave me another chance to take part in.

✓ For example, last term at my university I forgot the date of one of my final exams, but the teacher was so friendly he gave me another chance to take part in it.

'last term of my university'应为'last term at my university'。'final exam'应为复数'final exams'。句尾缺少介词宾语'it'。

× There are many things I need to remember such as the places where I need to go and the places where I place my things such as keys and the car.

✓ There are many things I need to remember such as the places where I need to go and the places where I put my things such as keys and the car.

'place'作为动词时，意思是放置，但更常用的是'put'，更自然。

× It always can remind me something which I need to do during the day.

✓ It can always remind me of something which I need to do during the day.

'remind me something'应为'remind me of something'，动词remind后需加介词of。'always'位置调整更自然。