Memory— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: 回答が不自然で文法的な誤りがあります。例えば、「memory thing」は誤用で、「good at memorising」や「have a good memory」と言うべきです。また、内容が曖昧で効果的ではありません。より明確で簡潔な表現を心がけましょう。

Ví dụ: I'm not very good at memorising things, but I usually remember important information that I need for exams.

Gợi ý: 文法と語彙の誤りが目立ちます。「forgot to get on that train」より「missed the train」の方が自然です。また、「so I lost」は意味が不明瞭です。理由を明確にし、文を簡潔にまとめましょう。

Ví dụ: Yes, I once missed a night train because I completely forgot my schedule, which caused me a lot of trouble.

Gợi ý: 文法的に不正確で、言いたいことが伝わりにくいです。「put to a schedule」や「not forgot my task」は誤りです。もっと自然な表現で、具体的に説明しましょう。

Ví dụ: I keep a schedule on my computer to remind me of important tasks at work so that I don't forget them.

Gợi ý: 語彙の誤用が多く、意味が伝わりにくいです。「post rate write」は「post-it notes」や「sticky notes」の誤りと思われます。文を整理し、正しい単語を使いましょう。

Ví dụ: I usually write important schedules on sticky notes and put them on the wall because they are easy to see.

× I'm not. I wouldn't say I'm a good memory thing, however, I tend to remember things that never come up on the test.

✓ I'm not. I wouldn't say I have a good memory, however, I tend to remember things that never come up on the test.

The phrase 'a good memory thing' is incorrect. The correct expression is 'have a good memory' because 'memory' is a noun and 'good' is an adjective describing it. 'Thing' is unnecessary and incorrect here.

× Yes I have. I booked a night train but I forgot to get on that train because maybe I totally forgot my schedule so I lost.

✓ Yes, I have. I booked a night train but I forgot to get on that train because I totally forgot my schedule, so I missed it.

The phrase 'so I lost' is incorrect in this context. The correct verb is 'missed' to indicate failing to catch the train. Also, 'maybe' is unnecessary and disrupts the sentence flow. Adding commas improves clarity.

× I put to a schedule on my uh, computer, uh, for my workplace because some work is really important, so I just remember to, uh, not forgot my task.

✓ I put a schedule on my computer for my workplace because some work is really important, so I just remember not to forget my tasks.

The phrase 'put to a schedule' is incorrect; the correct phrase is 'put a schedule'. Also, 'not forgot' is incorrect; it should be 'not to forget' because 'forget' follows 'to' in the infinitive form. 'Task' should be plural 'tasks' to match the context.

× I usually use a post rate write to about my important schedule and put to put put them on the wall.

✓ I usually use a post-it note to write about my important schedule and put them on the wall.

The phrase 'post rate write to about' is incorrect. The correct term is 'post-it note' and the verb phrase should be 'to write about'. Also, 'put to put put' is a repetition error and should be simplified to 'put'.

× It's easy to see my schedule so I think it's really.

✓ It's easy to see my schedule, so I think it's really helpful.

The sentence ends abruptly with 'really' which is incomplete. Adding 'helpful' completes the thought and improves sentence structure. Also, adding a comma before 'so' improves readability.