Memory— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: 回答中存在语法错误和表达不自然的问题，建议简化句子结构，避免冗余，并使用更准确的词汇表达。

Ví dụ: Yes, I have always been good at memorising things since I was a child. For example, I can easily remember what I learned in my math and English classes, as well as the steps in experiments. I believe having a good memory helps me gain new perspectives.

Gợi ý: 回答内容较为简单，建议增加细节描述并使用连接词，使表达更连贯自然。

Ví dụ: Yes, I have forgotten important things such as my ID card and keys. I often couldn't remember where or when I placed them. Therefore, I have started to be more careful and always check my belongings before leaving.

Gợi ý: 回答不完整且表达不清晰，建议完整表达观点，使用连接词，并避免语法错误。

Ví dụ: In my daily life, I need to remember two important things. First, my essential items such as keys and ID card, which I use every day. Second, my schedule or study plan, which helps me manage my time effectively.

Gợi ý: 回答表达混乱且语法错误较多，建议理清思路，使用简单句子和连接词，清晰描述记忆方法。

Ví dụ: To remember important items, I always check if they are in my pocket or bag before leaving. For my schedule, I make a to-do list, which helps me keep track of my tasks and stay organized.

× Actually I am good at memory as I was a child.

✓ Actually, I have been good at memory since I was a child.

这里需要使用现在完成时态（have been）来表示从过去持续到现在的状态，而不是简单过去时（was）。

× I can easily memorize that what I have learned in mathematics class or English class and what I have did when the experimental sections.

✓ I can easily memorize what I have learned in mathematics class or English class and what I have done during the experimental sessions.

动词“did”应使用过去分词“done”与助动词“have”连用，构成现在完成时。

× what I have did when the experimental sections.

✓ what I have done during the experimental sessions.

介词“when”不适合此处，应该用“during”表示在某个时间段内。

× I think memory makes me gives me more new perspectives.

✓ I think memory gives me more new perspectives.

“makes me gives me”结构重复且错误，应去掉“makes me”，保留“gives me”。

× I couldn't remember where I put these things and I couldn't remember when I put these things in the specific places.

✓ I couldn't remember where I had put these things and I couldn't remember when I had put these things in specific places.

这里需要使用过去完成时（had put）表示在过去某一时间之前已经完成的动作。

× I need to remember 2 important things in my daily life.

✓ I need to remember two important things in my daily life.

数字“2”应写成英文单词“two”，更符合书面表达规范。

× The first one is my essential items like keys also ID card which is very necessary in my daily life and then the second one is my schedule also I call it my study plan which makes.

✓ The first one is my essential items like keys and my ID card, which are very necessary in my daily life. The second one is my schedule, which I also call my study plan.

句子结构混乱，缺少连词，代词使用不当，需拆分句子并调整代词和连接词。

× For the above things, the first one important items I take trust of my important since I confirm whether it is in my pocket or whether it's in my bags and the second one is I need to list A to do list and it is important when I do something before.

✓ For the above things, for the first important items, I make sure to check whether they are in my pocket or in my bag. The second is that I need to make a to-do list, which is important when I do something in advance.

介词使用错误，“take trust of”表达不当，应改为“make sure to check”；“bags”应为单数“bag”；句子结构混乱，需调整语序和表达。