MemoryPart 1 Báo cáo

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Part 1

Giám khảo

Are you good at memorising things?

Thí sinh

Definitely, I'm quite good at it. For example, when I need to remember some important information, I'll usually keep looking at it several times and try to store it in my mind.

Giám khảo

Have you ever forgotten something important?

Thí sinh

Yes, I have lost my key. This is very important. So I have to replace the lock of my door. I think it's a bad experience.

Giám khảo

What do you need to remember in your daily life?

Thí sinh

In my daily life I have to remember my daily routine. If I met something important I will record it on my phone so it will reminds me what should I do.

Giám khảo

How do you remember important things?

Thí sinh

If I need to remember something important I really record it on my phone. I have a smart app and it will reminds me so I will never forget about it.

Đánh giá

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Tổng: 5.5Trôi chảy và mạch lạc: 6.0Phát âm: 5.5Ngữ pháp: 5.5Từ vựng: 5.5

Part 1

Are you good at memorising things?

Điểm: 75.0

Gợi ý: 回答较为自然且直接,但缺乏更多具体细节和连贯的连接词。建议在回答中加入更多具体例子,并使用连接词使表达更流畅。

Ví dụ: Yes, I am quite good at memorising things. For instance, when I need to remember important information, I usually review it several times to help store it in my memory effectively.

Have you ever forgotten something important?

Điểm: 70.0

Gợi ý: 回答内容简单且句子较短,缺少连贯性和丰富细节。建议使用连接词连接句子,并详细描述经历和感受。

Ví dụ: Yes, I once lost my key, which was very important. As a result, I had to replace the lock on my door, and it was quite a frustrating experience.

What do you need to remember in your daily life?

Điểm: 65.0

Gợi ý: 回答中存在语法错误,且表达不够连贯。建议注意时态和语法,使用连接词,并提供更具体的细节。

Ví dụ: In my daily life, I need to remember my routine. Whenever I encounter something important, I record it on my phone so that it reminds me what I should do.

How do you remember important things?

Điểm: 70.0

Gợi ý: 回答重复且语法有误,缺少多样词汇和连贯表达。建议改进语法,避免重复,并使用连接词丰富内容。

Ví dụ: When I need to remember something important, I usually record it on my phone using a smart app, which reminds me so that I never forget.

Ngữ pháp

Past tense issue

× Yes, I have lost my key.

Yes, I lost my key.

这里使用一般过去时更合适,因为描述的是过去发生的具体事件。现在完成时强调与现在的关联,而此处更侧重于过去的经历。

Incorrect use of pronouns

× If I met something important I will record it on my phone so it will reminds me what should I do.

If I meet something important, I will record it on my phone so it will remind me what I should do.

条件句中应使用一般现在时(meet),而不是过去式(met)。动词remind后不加s,因为主语是it,will后动词用原形。疑问句语序不正确,应为陈述句语序。

Incorrect use of pronouns

× If I need to remember something important I really record it on my phone.

If I need to remember something important, I really record it on my phone.

句子缺少逗号,增加逗号使句子更清晰。

Incorrect use of pronouns

× I have a smart app and it will reminds me so I will never forget about it.

I have a smart app and it will remind me so I will never forget about it.

助动词will后动词应为原形,不能加s。

Từ vựng trọng tâm

BadSubstandard; Harmful; Unpleasant; Inauspicious; Severe
GoodFine; Virtuous; Well-behaved; Right; Capable
ImportantSignificant; Main; Powerful
LostMissing; Off course; Missed; Bygone; Extinct
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