Part 1
Giám khảo
Are you good at memorising things?
Thí sinh
Of course I very like memory some things because I am a very a lot to. I very like to memory some old things. So I very so I good at memories, memories things.
Giám khảo
Have you ever forgotten something important?
Thí sinh
Of course, I think forgotten something important is a very normal thing, so I also forgot him some important things.
Giám khảo
What do you need to remember in your daily life?
Thí sinh
I need to remember in my daily life is just study, yes just maybe teacher teach me some important things and some subjects like maths, chemistry I need to remember in my daily life.
Giám khảo
How do you remember important things?
Thí sinh
And maybe it's not very important, I will remember use my mind, but but if it's very important, I will write down on my notebook.
Are you good at memorising things?
Điểm: 30.0Gợi ý: 你的回答语法错误较多,表达不够自然,且内容重复。建议简洁明了地回答问题,避免冗余,并使用正确的时态和词汇。
Ví dụ: Yes, I am quite good at memorising things because I often practice by recalling information regularly. For example, I like to remember historical facts that interest me.
Have you ever forgotten something important?
Điểm: 40.0Gợi ý: 回答中语法和表达不清晰,缺乏具体细节。建议直接回答问题,并举例说明忘记重要事情的经历。
Ví dụ: Yes, I have forgotten important things before. For instance, once I forgot to submit an assignment on time, which taught me to be more organized.
What do you need to remember in your daily life?
Điểm: 45.0Gợi ý: 回答结构不清晰,表达重复且缺乏连贯性。建议先给出主题句,然后用具体细节支持,并使用连接词使回答更流畅。
Ví dụ: In my daily life, I need to remember the lessons taught by my teachers, especially important subjects like maths and chemistry, because they are essential for my studies.
How do you remember important things?
Điểm: 50.0Gợi ý: 回答表达不够自然,语法错误较多。建议使用更准确的表达方式,并说明具体方法。
Ví dụ: If something is not very important, I try to remember it mentally. However, for very important things, I write them down in my notebook to avoid forgetting.
× Of course I very like memory some things because I am a very a lot to.
✓ Of course, I very like to memorize some things because I am very interested in them.
句子中形容词和副词的顺序不正确,'very like memory' 应改为 'very like to memorize',且 'a very a lot to' 结构混乱,应表达为 'very interested in them'。建议调整词序,使表达更自然。
× I very like to memory some old things.
✓ I really like to memorize some old things.
动词 'memory' 用错,应使用动词 'memorize'。此外,'very like' 不符合英语习惯,应改为 'really like'。
× So I very so I good at memories, memories things.
✓ So I am very good at memorizing things.
动词形式错误,'memories' 应为动名词 'memorizing',且缺少系动词 'am'。句子结构需调整以符合语法。
× Of course, I think forgotten something important is a very normal thing, so I also forgot him some important things.
✓ Of course, I think forgetting something important is a very normal thing, so I have also forgotten some important things.
'forgotten' 用作形容词时应为动名词 'forgetting',且 'forgot him some important things' 结构错误,应为 'have also forgotten some important things'。时态需保持一致。
× I need to remember in my daily life is just study, yes just maybe teacher teach me some important things and some subjects like maths, chemistry I need to remember in my daily life.
✓ What I need to remember in my daily life is just studying; yes, maybe the teacher teaches me some important things and some subjects like maths and chemistry that I need to remember.
介词使用不当,'remember in my daily life is just study' 结构混乱,应调整为 'What I need to remember in my daily life is just studying'。此外,缺少冠词和连词,句子需分割以增强清晰度。
× And maybe it's not very important, I will remember use my mind, but but if it's very important, I will write down on my notebook.
✓ Maybe if it's not very important, I will remember it using my mind, but if it's very important, I will write it down in my notebook.
连词使用不当,句子结构混乱。'remember use my mind' 应为 'remember it using my mind','write down on my notebook' 应为 'write it down in my notebook'。建议简化句子结构,避免重复连词。