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Part 1

Giám khảo

Are you good at memorising things?

Thí sinh

I think I'm good at memorizing things. You know, I'm a college student and I have to remember all kinds of maths center problems. So it is quite important for me to memorize all kinds of knowledge. It is essential for college.

Giám khảo

Have you ever forgotten something important?

Thí sinh

Yes, when I was 8 years old my mother taught me to buy some chicken but I forgot it. I spent almost all my afternoon playing computer games with my friends when my mother come.

Giám khảo

What do you need to remember in your daily life?

Thí sinh

I need to remember what vegetables and meat to buy and how to cook my lunch and dinner. I should remember the time and how to cook my meals. It is essential for me.

Giám khảo

How do you remember important things?

Thí sinh

Let me see, you know, it is quite difficult to remember all the things in my daily life, so I always take notes on my mobile phone, which is quite convenient and easy for me to remember vital things in daily life.

Đánh giá

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Tổng: 6.0Trôi chảy và mạch lạc: 6.0Phát âm: 6.0Ngữ pháp: 5.5Từ vựng: 6.0

Part 1

Are you good at memorising things?

Điểm: 75.0

Gợi ý: 回答时应避免重复表达,如“all kinds of”多次出现,显得冗余。可以更自然地表达记忆的重要性,并增加具体细节。

Ví dụ: Yes, I consider myself quite good at memorizing, especially since I need to recall various mathematical concepts for my college courses, which is essential for my studies.

Have you ever forgotten something important?

Điểm: 70.0

Gợi ý: 回答中语法错误较多,如“when my mother come”应为“when my mother came”。建议使用连词使句子更连贯,并补充更多细节。

Ví dụ: Yes, once when I was eight, my mother asked me to buy some chicken, but I forgot because I spent the whole afternoon playing computer games with my friends. When my mother came back, she was quite disappointed.

What do you need to remember in your daily life?

Điểm: 72.0

Gợi ý: 回答中内容重复,如“how to cook”出现两次。建议使用连接词丰富句子结构,并提供更具体的例子。

Ví dụ: In my daily life, I need to remember which vegetables and meats to buy, as well as the cooking times and methods for preparing my lunch and dinner, which are essential for maintaining a healthy diet.

How do you remember important things?

Điểm: 78.0

Gợi ý: 回答开头的口语填充词较多,影响流畅度。建议直接切入主题,并用连接词使表达更连贯。

Ví dụ: I find it difficult to remember everything, so I usually take notes on my mobile phone because it's convenient and helps me keep track of important tasks.

Ngữ pháp

Past tense issue

× I spent almost all my afternoon playing computer games with my friends when my mother come.

I spent almost all my afternoon playing computer games with my friends when my mother came.

这里的动作发生在过去,所以动词应该用过去式。'come' 应该改为过去式 'came'。

Incorrect use of prepositions

× I have to remember all kinds of maths center problems.

I have to remember all kinds of math center problems.

'maths center' 这里应为 'math center',因为 'maths' 是英式英语,且 'center' 前不需要复数形式的 'maths',应使用单数形式。

Incorrect use of prepositions

× It is essential for college.

It is essential for college students.

'for college' 结构不完整,应该明确是对谁重要,补充 'students' 使句子完整。

Incorrect use of prepositions

× I need to remember what vegetables and meat to buy and how to cook my lunch and dinner.

I need to remember which vegetables and meat to buy and how to cook my lunch and dinner.

'what' 用于询问种类时不准确,应该用 'which' 来限定具体的蔬菜和肉类。

Từ vựng trọng tâm

DifficultHard; Troublesome; Inconvenient
EasyUncomplicated; Docile; Vulnerable; Leisurely
GoodFine; Virtuous; Well-behaved; Right; Capable
ImportantSignificant; Main; Powerful
OldElderly; Dilapidated; Worn; Antique; Mature
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