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Part 1

Giám khảo

Are you good at memorising things?

Thí sinh

Yes, of course. To be honest, I'm passionate about memorizing a lot of things in my daily life, especially movies and books.

Giám khảo

Have you ever forgotten something important?

Thí sinh

Yeah, to be honest, I once forgot an important appointment with my best friend Sarah, and after that I felt really frustrated and disappointed. So I often make a detailed plan before the important things.

Giám khảo

What do you need to remember in your daily life?

Thí sinh

Well, to be honest, I need to remember lots of things in my daily life, such as what to eat in the morning and lots of practical and professional information about the examinations.

Giám khảo

How do you remember important things?

Thí sinh

Well, I remember important things by lots of methods. They are very useful and practical, such as writing down something important on your cell phone or your notebooks. It is a good way for you to avoid missing some important appointments and events.

Đánh giá

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Tổng: 6.0Trôi chảy và mạch lạc: 6.0Phát âm: 6.0Ngữ pháp: 6.0Từ vựng: 6.0

Part 1

Are you good at memorising things?

Điểm: 75.0

Gợi ý: 回答较为自然,但开头重复使用了"to be honest",显得有些冗余。建议回答时避免重复表达,且可以增加具体细节来丰富内容。

Ví dụ: Yes, I am quite good at memorising things. For example, I often remember dialogues from movies and passages from books, which helps me improve my language skills.

Have you ever forgotten something important?

Điểm: 80.0

Gợi ý: 回答内容具体且有逻辑,但开头的"to be honest"重复使用,建议用其他表达替换。结尾部分可以用连接词使句子更连贯。

Ví dụ: Yes, I once forgot an important appointment with my best friend Sarah, which made me feel really frustrated. Therefore, I now always make a detailed plan before important events to avoid such mistakes.

What do you need to remember in your daily life?

Điểm: 70.0

Gợi ý: 回答中"to be honest"使用频繁,建议减少。内容较笼统,建议提供更具体的例子,并使用连接词使表达更流畅。

Ví dụ: In my daily life, I need to remember various things, such as my breakfast choices and important details related to my upcoming exams, like dates and key topics.

How do you remember important things?

Điểm: 75.0

Gợi ý: 回答表达清晰,但开头较笼统,建议直接给出具体方法,并使用连接词增强逻辑性。避免使用"you",应以第一人称表达。

Ví dụ: I use several methods to remember important things. For instance, I write down key information on my phone or in my notebook, which helps me avoid missing appointments and events.

Ngữ pháp

Incorrect use of prepositions

× So I often make a detailed plan before the important things.

So I often make a detailed plan for important things.

这里介词使用错误,'make a plan for something' 是正确搭配,表示为某事制定计划,而 'before the important things' 语义不通,建议改为 'for important things'。

Incorrect use of pronouns

× They are very useful and practical, such as writing down something important on your cell phone or your notebooks.

They are very useful and practical, such as writing down something important on my cell phone or my notebooks.

这里代词使用不当,学生在描述自己的记忆方法时,应使用第一人称代词 'my',而不是第二人称 'your',以保持语境一致。

Từ vựng trọng tâm

BestFinest; To the highest standard
GoodFine; Virtuous; Well-behaved; Right; Capable
ImportantSignificant; Main; Powerful
UsefulFunctional; Beneficial
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