Memory— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: Your answer is understandable but could be more natural and concise. Avoid redundancy and improve sentence structure. For example, instead of saying "Because I have age," say "Because of my age." Also, clarify the use of apps and avoid unnecessary details like "on my headphones."

Ví dụ: No, I'm not very good at memorising things because of my age. Therefore, I usually write important information down or use reminder apps on my phone to help me remember.

Gợi ý: Your answer is unclear and contains grammatical errors. Try to structure your response with a clear topic sentence and supporting details. Use linking words to connect ideas logically. Avoid repeating phrases and incomplete sentences.

Ví dụ: Yes, I have forgotten important things before. To prevent this, I use reminder apps on my phone that send me notifications. This helps me remember important tasks in advance.

Gợi ý: Your answer has some unclear words and awkward phrasing, such as "looting things" and "stirs." Try to use precise vocabulary and organize your ideas clearly. Start with a topic sentence and add specific examples with linking words.

Ví dụ: The most important thing I need to remember daily is my schedule, especially my priorities and urgent problems. Additionally, I have to remember my son's homework and prepare healthy meals for my family.

Gợi ý: Your answer is generally clear but can be improved by using better linking words and more natural expressions. Avoid repeating phrases like "I would like to." Also, clarify the timing and method of repetition.

Ví dụ: I usually use reminder apps on my phone to get notifications. Besides that, I repeat important information to myself a few days in advance to help remember. Sometimes, I also ask my family members to remind me.

× No, I'm not very good at memorizing things. Because I have age, it's difficult for me to memorize things in my brain, so I will need to write them down on paper or use apps on my headphones to help me be aware of things.

✓ No, I'm not very good at memorizing things because of my age; it's difficult for me to memorize things, so I need to write them down on paper or use apps on my headphones to help me remember things.

The original sentence starts with 'Because' which creates a sentence fragment. Combining the sentences properly improves clarity. Also, 'I have age' is incorrect; the correct expression is 'because of my age'. 'Help me be aware of things' is awkward; 'help me remember things' is more appropriate.

× Yes, I had as I have always forgotten important things I would like to use digital apps on my cell phone so that is will send me reminders and notifications that I won't easily as I won't easily forget the important things as well as I would remise myself ahead so that I.

✓ Yes, I have, as I have always forgotten important things. I would like to use digital apps on my cell phone so that they will send me reminders and notifications, and I won't easily forget important things. I also remind myself ahead of time.

The original sentence has tense inconsistency and incomplete structure. 'I had' is incorrect here; 'I have' fits better. 'Is will' is a typo and should be 'they will'. 'Remise' is incorrect; the correct word is 'remind'. The sentence is fragmented and needs to be split for clarity.

× It's the most important things I need to remember is my smart schedule.

✓ The most important thing I need to remember is my smart schedule.

'Things' is plural but the verb 'is' is singular, causing disagreement. Changing 'things' to singular 'thing' matches the singular verb 'is'.

× On the other hand, in daily life, I need to remember some looting things such as my son's homework and stirs, healthy meals I need.

✓ On the other hand, in daily life, I need to remember some routine things such as my son's homework, chores, and healthy meals I need to prepare.

'Looting things' is incorrect; likely intended 'routine things'. 'Stirs' is unclear; 'chores' fits better. The sentence structure is awkward and needs rephrasing for clarity.

× And I would like to also repeat the important things in my brains I had before two or three days ahead so that I will not easily forget them.

✓ And I would also like to repeat the important things in my brain that I learned two or three days earlier so that I will not easily forget them.

'Brains' should be singular 'brain'. 'I had before two or three days ahead' is incorrect; 'that I learned two or three days earlier' is clearer. The verb form and word choice need correction.