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Part 1

Giám khảo

Are you good at memorising things?

Thí sinh

I can truly tell you that it all depends if I if I am reading a book when I when I finished, I can't remember the name of the the name of the girls or boys in the books or in the books.

Giám khảo

Have you ever forgotten something important?

Thí sinh

No, I haven't. If this thing is really important, important for me, I will always remember it. If I if I don't finish it before I finish it, I I can't sleep well or I can't eat well.

Giám khảo

What do you need to remember in your daily life?

Thí sinh

Well, a lot of things I need to remember in my daily life. For example, I I should remember not to forget to take my key before I get out. Before I get out I I need to remember.

Giám khảo

How do you remember important things?

Thí sinh

I will tap it down in my phone note if I need to remember the important things I was it was easy for me to to forget things. So I I need to tap it, tap it down or write it down.

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Tổng: 5.5Trôi chảy và mạch lạc: 5.5Phát âm: 5.5Ngữ pháp: 5.5Từ vựng: 5.5

Part 1

Are you good at memorising things?

Điểm: 55.0

Gợi ý: 回答中存在重复和语法错误,表达不够流畅自然。建议简化句子结构,避免重复,并且直接回答问题。可以使用连接词使表达更连贯。

Ví dụ: It depends on the material. For example, when I finish reading a book, I often forget the names of the characters because I don't focus on memorizing them.

Have you ever forgotten something important?

Điểm: 60.0

Gợi ý: 回答中有重复和语法错误,表达不够清晰。建议简洁明了地表达观点,并用具体细节支持。

Ví dụ: No, I haven't forgotten anything important. If something is really important to me, I make sure to complete it; otherwise, I feel uneasy and can't sleep well.

What do you need to remember in your daily life?

Điểm: 50.0

Gợi ý: 回答重复且不够具体,缺少连贯性。建议直接回答问题,避免重复,并提供具体例子。

Ví dụ: I need to remember many things daily, such as taking my keys before leaving the house to avoid locking myself out.

How do you remember important things?

Điểm: 55.0

Gợi ý: 回答中有语法错误和重复,表达不够流畅。建议简洁表达并使用连接词,使句子更自然。

Ví dụ: I usually write important things down in my phone's notes app because I tend to forget easily, so this helps me remember them better.

Ngữ pháp

Past tense issue

× I can truly tell you that it all depends if I if I am reading a book when I when I finished, I can't remember the name of the the name of the girls or boys in the books or in the books.

I can truly tell you that it all depends. If I am reading a book, when I finish, I can't remember the names of the girls or boys in the book.

这里的错误是时态使用不当。句中“when I finished”应改为“when I finish”,因为描述的是一般现在时的习惯动作,而不是过去时。建议使用一般现在时来表达习惯性动作。

Singular and plural issue

× I can truly tell you that it all depends if I if I am reading a book when I when I finished, I can't remember the name of the the name of the girls or boys in the books or in the books.

I can truly tell you that it all depends. If I am reading a book, when I finish, I can't remember the names of the girls or boys in the book.

这里“the name of the girls or boys”中“name”应为复数“names”,因为指的是多个女孩或男孩的名字。名词单复数要与所指对象数量一致。

Singular and plural issue

× I will tap it down in my phone note if I need to remember the important things I was it was easy for me to to forget things.

I will write it down in my phone notes if I need to remember important things because it is easy for me to forget things.

“phone note”应为复数形式“phone notes”,表示手机里的备忘录。名词单复数要根据具体语境正确使用。

Past tense issue

× I will tap it down in my phone note if I need to remember the important things I was it was easy for me to to forget things.

I will write it down in my phone notes if I need to remember important things because it is easy for me to forget things.

句中“was it was easy”时态混乱,应改为“because it is easy”,保持时态一致,表达现在的事实。

Incorrect use of prepositions

× I will tap it down in my phone note if I need to remember the important things I was it was easy for me to to forget things.

I will write it down in my phone notes if I need to remember important things because it is easy for me to forget things.

“tap it down in my phone note”中“tap down”用法不当,正确表达应为“write it down”,且“in my phone notes”表示在手机备忘录里。介词使用要符合固定搭配。

Từ vựng trọng tâm

EasyUncomplicated; Docile; Vulnerable; Leisurely
ImportantSignificant; Main; Powerful
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