Part 1
Giám khảo
Are you good at memorising things?
Thí sinh
Yes, I think I'm good at memorizing things and because I always taking note to help me memorizing things and.
Giám khảo
Have you ever forgotten something important?
Thí sinh
Yes, I forgot uh, something important when I was in college because I didn't umm, take note for that. So, uh, for umm meeting. So umm, I didn't attend to the meeting. That was my mistake.
Giám khảo
What do you need to remember in your daily life?
Thí sinh
I think I need to remember taking medicines in my daily life for example, such as calcium, vitamin, that those are making me healthier.
Giám khảo
How do you remember important things?
Thí sinh
I like to read taking note in on my phone so it will let me know what should I do and I will make alarm to to let me know.
Are you good at memorising things?
Điểm: 60.0Gợi ý: 回答中存在语法错误和表达不自然的问题,例如“because I always taking note”应为“because I always take notes”。建议简化句子结构,避免重复表达,提高语言的自然流畅度。
Ví dụ: Yes, I am good at memorizing things because I always take notes to help me remember important information.
Have you ever forgotten something important?
Điểm: 55.0Gợi ý: 回答中充满了填充词(如“uh”,“umm”),影响流畅度。句子结构不完整且表达不够清晰。建议减少口头语,使用完整句子,并且逻辑更连贯。
Ví dụ: Yes, I once forgot an important meeting in college because I didn't take notes. As a result, I missed the meeting, which was a big mistake.
What do you need to remember in your daily life?
Điểm: 65.0Gợi ý: 回答中表达不够准确,语法有误,如“that those are making me healthier”应改为“which help me stay healthy”。建议使用更准确的表达,并且句子更简洁自然。
Ví dụ: I need to remember to take my medicines every day, such as calcium and vitamins, which help me stay healthy.
How do you remember important things?
Điểm: 60.0Gợi ý: 回答中语法错误较多,如“read taking note in on my phone”应为“read notes on my phone”。建议简化表达,使用正确的语法结构,并且逻辑清晰。
Ví dụ: I usually read notes on my phone and set alarms to remind me of important tasks.
× Yes, I think I'm good at memorizing things and because I always taking note to help me memorizing things and.
✓ Yes, I think I'm good at memorizing things because I always take notes to help me memorize things.
动词后面接动名词或不定式时,结构要正确。这里应使用动词原形take和memorize,而不是taking和memorizing。并且句子中and连接不当,应去掉。
× Yes, I forgot uh, something important when I was in college because I didn't umm, take note for that.
✓ Yes, I forgot something important when I was in college because I didn't take notes for that.
过去时态中,动词应使用过去式或过去分词。这里take note应改为take notes,且note应为复数形式。
× So, uh, for umm meeting. So umm, I didn't attend to the meeting.
✓ So, uh, for the meeting, I didn't attend the meeting.
动词attend后不加介词to,应直接跟宾语。并且meeting前应加定冠词the。
× I think I need to remember taking medicines in my daily life for example, such as calcium, vitamin, that those are making me healthier.
✓ I think I need to remember to take medicines in my daily life, for example, calcium and vitamins, which make me healthier.
动词remember后接动词时,需用不定式to take而非动名词taking。vitamin应为复数形式vitamins。which引导定语从句,谓语用make而非making。
× I like to read taking note in on my phone so it will let me know what should I do and I will make alarm to to let me know.
✓ I like to read notes on my phone so it will let me know what I should do, and I will set an alarm to remind me.
read后应接名词notes而非动名词taking note。介词on后不应有in。句子中what I should do语序应为陈述句。make alarm应改为set an alarm。