Memory— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: 你的回答表达了观点，但句子结构不够自然，且有语法错误。建议简化句子结构，避免重复表达，并使用更地道的表达方式。

Ví dụ: No, I'm not very good at memorising things. I often forget important details in my daily schedule. For example, before an exam, I sometimes forget to review the key points.

Gợi ý: 回答中存在语法错误和表达不清的问题，建议使用完整且连贯的句子，明确表达情感和原因。

Ví dụ: Yes, I have, and it annoyed me a lot. For instance, I once forgot my best friend's birthday, which upset her. I apologized sincerely because I didn't mean to hurt her feelings.

Gợi ý: 回答内容较具体，但表达不够清晰，句子结构复杂且有语法错误。建议简化句子，明确表达重点，并使用恰当的连接词。

Ví dụ: As an international seller, I need to remember important dates for product updates and shipments. Therefore, I usually make notes on my phone and e-book as reminders.

Gợi ý: 回答较为自然，但有些语法和用词错误。建议注意单复数形式和表达的准确性，使用更地道的短语。

Ví dụ: I prefer to make notes on my mobile phone rather than on paper because it's more convenient. Wherever I go, I can check my reminders, and I also set alarms to keep track of important tasks.

× No, I wouldn't call myself who is good at memorizing things.

✓ No, I wouldn't call myself good at memorizing things.

句中“myself who is good”中的“who”使用不当，应该直接用形容词短语修饰“myself”，去掉“who”更符合英语表达习惯。

× I always forget some details in my daily schedule.

✓ I always forget some details of my daily schedule.

“forget details in my daily schedule”中的介词“in”用法不准确，应该用“of”表示“日程中的细节”。

× if I have to take the exam, I always forget to go over the important knowledge before I go to the exam.

✓ if I have to take the exam, I always forget to go over the important knowledge before the exam.

“go to the exam”表达不自然，通常说“before the exam”即可，去掉“go to”更符合英语习惯。

× Yes, I have annoying me a lot.

✓ Yes, it has annoyed me a lot.

原句结构混乱，“I have annoying me”不符合英语语法，应改为“It has annoyed me”表示“这让我很烦恼”。

× I'm actually someone not very good at memorizing things even though it's a big event for me.

✓ I'm actually not very good at memorizing things even though it's a big event for me.

“someone not very good”结构不自然，直接说“I’m not very good”更简洁准确。

× I apologized to her because I don't I didn't want.

✓ I apologized to her because I didn't want to.

句中“don't I didn't want”时态混用且缺少动词不定式“to”，应改为“didn't want to”。

× As an international seller, I need to remember some important days, which stands for the specific time our items have to improve and be output.

✓ As an international seller, I need to remember some important days, which stand for the specific times our items have to improve and be output.

“days”是复数，关系代词后谓语动词应使用复数“stand”，且“time”应改为复数“times”。

× So I prefer to make some notes on my ebook and just on my phone, so that is a reminder to call.

✓ So I prefer to make some notes on my ebook and also on my phone, so that is a reminder to call.

“and just on my phone”表达不清，“just”用法不当，改为“also”更合适。

× I prefer to make a note on my mobile phone instead of writing those things down on paper.

✓ I prefer to make a note on my mobile phone instead of writing those things down on paper.

该句无明显语法错误，符合英语表达习惯。

× Wherever I go, I just open my phone and I can see those reminder.

✓ Wherever I go, I just open my phone and I can see those reminders.

“reminder”应为复数形式“reminders”，因为指多个提醒事项。

× I also set an alarm to keep the track of myself to remind myself.

✓ I also set an alarm to keep track of myself and to remind myself.

“keep the track of myself”中“the”多余，应为“keep track of myself”，且句子结构需调整使表达更清晰。