Memory— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: 回答时语言不够自然，有语法错误且表达不完整。建议简洁明了地回答问题，避免重复和不完整的句子。

Ví dụ: Yes, I am good at memorising things that are important to me, like study materials, because I am motivated to remember them.

Gợi ý: 回答内容不清晰，语法和表达混乱，缺少具体细节。建议用完整句子描述具体事件，并说明后果。

Ví dụ: Yes, I forgot to bring my phone yesterday, which caused problems because I couldn't contact anyone or use important apps.

Gợi ý: 回答不连贯，表达含糊且有语法错误。建议直接回答问题，列举具体需要记住的事项，并用连接词使句子流畅。

Ví dụ: In daily life, I need to remember to bring my keys and wallet when I go out, and prepare my work materials before going to the office.

Gợi ý: 回答表达不清楚，语法错误较多。建议用完整句子说明记忆方法，并举例说明其便利性。

Ví dụ: I use note-taking apps on my phone to remember important things because I always have my phone with me, so I can easily check my notes anytime.

× However, I am not good at remembering some basic daily.

✓ However, I am not good at remembering some basic daily things.

句子中缺少名词，daily 是形容词，需要加上名词 things 来完整表达意思。

× Yes, I had experienced this kind of situation just yesterday.

✓ Yes, I experienced this kind of situation just yesterday.

过去完成时（had experienced）通常用于描述过去某一时间之前已经完成的动作，这里只需简单过去时（experienced）即可，因为时间点是昨天。

× I forgot to bring my outdoor and this led to a bad consequence.

✓ I forgot to bring my outdoor things and this led to a bad consequence.

outdoor 是形容词，不能单独作名词使用，需要加上名词 things。

× As you know, phone is really is there is vital for our daily living and without phone we call.

✓ As you know, the phone is really vital for our daily living and without a phone we can't call.

缺少定冠词 the，且句子结构混乱，需调整为正确的 there be 结构和冠词使用。

× what things you need to bring when you need to go outdoor, what kind of preparation you need to do before you go to work or study.

✓ what things you need to bring when you need to go outdoors, what kind of preparation you need to do before you go to work or study.

go outdoor 应改为 go outdoors，outdoors 是副词，表示“在户外”。

× These two these are the verify to.

✓ These two are the key points.

原句结构混乱，无法理解，需重构句子表达清晰意思。

× I memorize important things by dropping notes in my mobile apps because I always carry my with me when I'm at home or at outdoor.

✓ I memorize important things by taking notes in my mobile apps because I always carry my phone with me when I'm at home or outdoors.

mobile apps 是复数，dropping notes 用词不当，应为 taking notes；缺少名词 phone；go outdoor 应为 outdoors。

× And the comedy is very convenient for us to check what kind of things that I miss what kind of.

✓ And the app is very convenient for us to check what kind of things I missed.

句子结构混乱，comedy 应为 app，且句子需简化以表达清楚意思。