Memory— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: 답변이 다소 모호하고 문법적 오류가 있습니다. 좀 더 명확하고 자연스러운 문장 구조를 사용하며, 구체적인 예시를 추가해 보세요. 예를 들어, 관심 있는 분야에서 기억력이 좋다는 점을 구체적으로 설명하면 좋습니다.

Ví dụ: I am quite good at memorising things when they relate to my major, such as important theories or concepts. However, for topics that don't interest me, I find it harder to remember details.

Gợi ý: 답변이 문법적으로 부정확하고 의미 전달이 명확하지 않습니다. 문장을 간결하고 논리적으로 구성하며, 구체적인 상황 설명을 추가하세요.

Ví dụ: Yes, last month I forgot my pencil and had no pen or paper with me, so I had to use my iPad to take notes instead.

Gợi ý: 답변이 다소 중복되고 어색한 표현이 있습니다. 더 자연스럽고 구체적인 일상 예시를 들어 문장을 명확하게 만드세요.

Ví dụ: I usually need to remember my daily schedule, like the times I attend fitness classes and when I need to be at the office.

Gợi ý: 전반적으로 이해는 되지만, 문법과 표현이 다소 부자연스럽습니다. 문장을 더 간결하고 정확하게 다듬고, 연결어를 사용해 보세요.

Ví dụ: I usually write important things on paper and place them on my desk to remind myself. Additionally, I use the calendar app on my smartphone because it is very convenient.

× If I'm interested in the fields such as my major, I try to remember things, but in other case I'm not good at memorizing things.

✓ If I'm interested in fields such as my major, I try to remember things, but in other cases I'm not good at memorizing things.

The phrase 'in the fields' is incorrect because 'fields' here is used in a general sense and does not require the definite article 'the'. Also, 'in other case' should be plural 'in other cases' to refer to different situations. This improves the naturalness and grammatical correctness of the sentence.

× Yes it was last month I lost my upper pencil so but I didn't have any pens or papers so I had to write down using my iPad and pauses I was.

✓ Yes, it was last month. I lost my pencil, but I didn't have any pens or paper, so I had to write using my iPad and pause.

The sentence has multiple issues: 'upper pencil' is unclear and likely incorrect; 'papers' should be 'paper' when referring to uncountable material; 'write down using' is awkward, better as 'write using'; 'pauses I was' is unclear and likely a mistake. Correcting these improves clarity and grammatical accuracy.

× So oftenly I have to remember my daily life routine, so such as when I go to my fitness classes and when I go to my office.

✓ So often, I have to remember my daily routine, such as when I go to my fitness classes and when I go to my office.

'Oftenly' is not a correct adverb; the correct form is 'often'. Also, 'so oftenly' is awkward; 'so often' is better. The phrase 'daily life routine' is better as 'daily routine'. Removing 'so' before 'such as' improves sentence flow.

× Actually I usually write down on papers and put it on my desk so it can make me more remember important things.

✓ Actually, I usually write things down on paper and put it on my desk so it can help me remember important things better.

The phrase 'write down on papers' is incorrect; 'write down' is a phrasal verb and 'on paper' is the correct prepositional phrase. 'Make me more remember' is ungrammatical; 'help me remember better' is correct. These corrections improve grammatical accuracy and clarity.